by Curt L.

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November 1, 2007

My Soda Shop Love ~ A Haiku for You

January 25, 2008 10:29 PM EST (Updated: January 25, 2008 10:31 PM EST)

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she; effervescence

me; a syrup addition,

united, we popped! :-)

Tags: youth, creative, haiku, humor, artistic, pretty, love, poem, poetry, interesting

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Comments: 68

elizabeth e. Jan 25, 2008, 10:32pm EST

This was just GREAT....perfect!

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Chelsea R. Jan 25, 2008, 10:42pm EST

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vickey w Jan 25, 2008, 10:44pm EST

Oh, this is so cute and thanks

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Text Painter Jan 25, 2008, 10:49pm EST

Very cute. I love the imagery here.

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Ruth Luce Jan 25, 2008, 11:04pm EST

Sounds absolutely lovely Curt!!

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Wilma M. Jan 25, 2008, 11:11pm EST

Funny! Great combination of images.

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Mariana T. Jan 25, 2008, 11:12pm EST

Curt, this was great - I loved it - and all of your haiku has such a unique feel - just like you! Salud.

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t b. Jan 25, 2008, 11:18pm EST

Very cute and also very interesting.
Good job.

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Rita j. Jan 25, 2008, 11:26pm EST

nice

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Cookie Queen K. Jan 25, 2008, 11:58pm EST

Cute there funny man! lol

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arlene (no shame in my game) w. Jan 26, 2008, 1:08am EST

Love this one! Very cute.

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J W. Jan 26, 2008, 1:38am EST

good haiku

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Ellie !. Jan 26, 2008, 1:44am EST

thanks so much for the happy smile

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Ellie !. Jan 26, 2008, 1:44am EST

you are one talented man

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Ellie !. Jan 26, 2008, 1:44am EST

isn't it grand how we all have our talents!

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lynn a. Jan 26, 2008, 1:57am EST

Cute. I didn't expect it. But I really like it.

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Sherrie H. Jan 26, 2008, 9:37am EST

Very silly. I like it.

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Lydia (part of the solution) Shelley Jan 26, 2008, 10:00am EST

Sweet!

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William Dotani Jan 26, 2008, 12:39pm EST

I think we need a visual to give this verse more sizzle.

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Lydia aka Freedom's Daughter Jan 26, 2008, 12:48pm EST

Oh Curt, I love it! Sweet (no pun intended,lol)

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arlene (no shame in my game) w. Jan 26, 2008, 1:09pm EST

I am suddenly craving a rootbeer float.

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arlene (no shame in my game) w. Jan 26, 2008, 1:09pm EST

I haven't had one in a long time.

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Altair driving around the neighborhood and waving Jan 26, 2008, 1:56pm EST

Sweet!...and sticky!

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William M. Jan 26, 2008, 2:11pm EST

Cute.

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Swimming With The Tide O. Jan 26, 2008, 2:20pm EST

Funny, I like it.

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Heather W. Jan 26, 2008, 7:41pm EST

I like it!

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Lawrence U. Jan 26, 2008, 7:43pm EST

Wonderful haiku! Thank you, Curt.

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queen.susan . Jan 26, 2008, 8:00pm EST

thanks for a unique haiku.
Good job.

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Rose T. Jan 26, 2008, 9:11pm EST

That was really good Curt! Oh how I long............. for the days of long gone by; when a meander down the road ment a rootbeer float at the drive-in A & W with friends. Gone are the dazes!

!0**********

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William Dotani Jan 27, 2008, 1:20am EST

Look what you've done. People are going to start drinking root beer floats because of this verse.

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Glenn T. Jan 27, 2008, 1:23am EST

Flavors in imaginative relativity!

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Ellie !. Jan 27, 2008, 2:39am EST

Hey, Mr. Soda Pop Love,
I posted my shoes...and extended an invitation for all my Gather Connections to come and enjoy any of the beaches I own along the Pacific Ocean....
heheheehe

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Ellie !. Jan 27, 2008, 2:39am EST

I've been bad...up late, up early, up late again. Gotta fix breakfast at 5:30 am, too!

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Ellie !. Jan 27, 2008, 2:40am EST

i really am lucky, my husband is an awesome person. No complaints...even after all these years. I'm mostly thankful that he puts up with me!

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samantha b. Jan 27, 2008, 12:48pm EST

very visual, very good, and very cute, i liked it

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necee t. Jan 27, 2008, 3:38pm EST

hi Curt... this is very sweet... 10

thank you for always commenting... Blessings to you always...

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Ellie !. Jan 28, 2008, 12:31am EST

curt, you're always sweet.

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Ellie !. Jan 28, 2008, 12:31am EST

hope you had a good day

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Ellie !. Jan 28, 2008, 12:31am EST

i need to clean the house

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Ellie !. Jan 28, 2008, 12:32am EST

i cooked dinner and got stood up...nobody appreciates me! whine, whine whine

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DIANE D. Jan 28, 2008, 12:59pm EST

A+ A TEN I SEND, LOVEDTHIS.

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Rebecca C. Jan 28, 2008, 7:16pm EST

Great job! 10 from me!

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Amy C. Jan 29, 2008, 11:45am EST

cute!

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Wilma M. Jan 29, 2008, 5:19pm EST

I had to come back by and see what "Related Articles" Gather thought up for you. At least, they are ALL by you, so that makes sense. Not like some of the "Related Articles" I've seen.

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debra g. Jan 29, 2008, 6:33pm EST

So cute,I love it!
I wanted to thank you for your comment on my article,I trust you got a laugh.
Have a happy gather day!!!!!

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Nyota *Star* Jan 30, 2008, 8:18pm EST

bubbly!

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Anne M. Jan 31, 2008, 8:54am EST

I needed a good chuckle. I always seem to find your wonderful Haiku exactly when I need them!
Thanks.

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sheila h. Jan 31, 2008, 1:10pm EST

so sweet! effervescent!i love that ..like champagne bubbles!

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sheila h. Jan 31, 2008, 1:12pm EST

i read it..and afterward i burped!:)
ok..belched...
ok try eructated...?

well it was great the second time,too!

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Curt L. Jan 31, 2008, 6:23pm EST

LOL! Sheila, try some TUMS! :-) xo!

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Kimber L. Jan 31, 2008, 8:18pm EST

That was great!! I got a neat visual in my head! LOve it

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debra g. Jan 31, 2008, 9:10pm EST

I stopped back by to say thank you for your comment on the grit tree.

Have a great gather day!!!!!

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N A Feb 1, 2008, 1:19pm EST

Oh, that was thrilling! I liked that. :)

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M. Bradley McCauley McCauley Feb 1, 2008, 1:24pm EST

Another ten and if I could, I'd do it again.

And, thanks for commenting on my Quick Tips - Focus on the Heart article. Please pass the info on to anyone who might not know it's the #1 killer in the US.

Quick Tips-Focus on the Heart

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William Dotani Feb 2, 2008, 3:10am EST

Well, later you'll need a spot of tea for relaxation

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Amanda "middle of nowhere" C. Feb 2, 2008, 12:10pm EST

I couldn't help but smile when I saw this one!

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lynn a. Feb 2, 2008, 1:51pm EST

I commented before, but just came across this again. I like it even better during the second read. It feels good.

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golds g. Feb 6, 2008, 12:50pm EST

cute

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Erin P. Feb 7, 2008, 4:23pm EST

Thanks for commenting on my Penny-Encrusted Van for Disabled Veterans article. I greatly appreciate your having taken the time to visit, read, rate, and/or comment!

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