by Steph-in-NE .....
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June 22, 2007

a poem from my son,,

October 12, 2007 01:05 AM EDT (Updated: October 12, 2007 01:06 AM EDT)
views: 53 | comments: 29

I have a poem my son wrote,, I got his permission to print it to you all..

he got a A on it in English

I am Your Master

 

I can make you rise or fall.
I can make you a success or failure.
I can work for you or against you.
I control the way you feel, and the way you act.
I can make you laugh, work and love.
I can make you wrentched, dejected or morbid.
I can make you sick and listless.
I can be as a shackled, heavy and burdensome.
Or I can be as a prisim's hue, dancing, bright and colorfull.
I can be nurtured and grown to be great and beutiful
Seen by the eyes of others through action in you.
I can never be removed, only replaced.
I am your ATTITUDE!

 I love his work,, trying him to do more yet he wont,  He said this is his way to do what he want,, no force, or presure.. 


 

these are pictures of my poet,, they match the poem abit I think
link to this page
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Comments: 29

Pete Carter III Oct 12, 2007, 1:31am EDT
Great work
Dena Straughn Oct 12, 2007, 1:55am EDT
Thank you for letting us read your son's poem. Attitude sometimes is the only thing we can change. We might as well enjoy this life.
Emma L. Oct 12, 2007, 2:03am EDT
Great poem
Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Oct 12, 2007, 2:17am EDT
Great poem Stephanie's son.
Barb M Oct 12, 2007, 2:38am EDT
No Wonder he got an A - great poem!!!!
April H. Oct 12, 2007, 2:54am EDT
Very nice poem!!
J W. Oct 12, 2007, 5:14am EDT
good poem
~~ Sarina ~~ Oct 12, 2007, 7:14am EDT
Stephanie, thank you for sharing your son's poem. He writes very well.
ashish j. Oct 12, 2007, 8:18am EDT
gooooood workkkk:)
Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Oct 12, 2007, 9:28am EDT
Please keep encouraging him to write. This is a good poem.
The Red Headed Witch of Gather G. Oct 12, 2007, 10:28am EDT
LOL nice
great poem, don't rush an artist steph....

always in their own time....

thanks!!! :- )
Jennifer Oliver Oct 12, 2007, 11:06am EDT
What a GREAT catch at the end. Loved it! A well-deserved grade. Thanks for sharing your son's talent with us!
Elsie Duggan Oct 12, 2007, 1:03pm EDT
This is a wonderful poem Stephanie, and he deserved that A, and attitude is everything in life, because it is what mades you succeed or fail, and I think from his poem, he has the outlines for success. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Tiffany G. Oct 12, 2007, 1:14pm EDT
Tell him he done a great job!
TK Rosevear Oct 12, 2007, 2:59pm EDT
Definitely a poet with some wisdom...:)
Beautiful!!!
Mark Lange Oct 12, 2007, 3:07pm EDT
I like it!~
Jamie S. Oct 12, 2007, 3:35pm EDT
that was great i can see why he got an A!
Dee - Nature Babe! Oct 12, 2007, 6:16pm EDT
Great poem, and as said above, don't push him. these things fall into pace all own their own.
J. P. Oct 13, 2007, 1:06am EDT
Nicely done!
carolyn m. Oct 13, 2007, 2:03am EDT
i agree with you i would like to read more of his poems
Susan N. Oct 13, 2007, 7:40pm EDT
What wordsmanship!
Very concise and a very wise sentiment.

Are you a Blue Devil? We are Blue Devils too - the only ones in Indiana.
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Oct 14, 2007, 6:48am EDT
I loved your son's poem!!

Thank him for his great work.
Bundy P Oct 15, 2007, 10:48pm EDT
Wonderful
Lisa (I love loons) C. Oct 16, 2007, 4:47pm EDT
Very good poem - tell him to keep the creative juices flowing :)
Lela M. Oct 21, 2007, 10:44am EDT
awesome poem.
tammy b. Oct 21, 2007, 7:29pm EDT
insightful poem, good looking kid

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