by Christine K.
Member since:
June 23, 2007

I Wish For a Place

January 21, 2009 08:29 AM EST
views: 58 | rating: 10/10 (16 votes) | comments: 27

I wish that I could find a place,

Where everyone can embrace,

Without feeling strange.



I wish that I could find a home,

Where kindness and love did roam,

With endless supplies.

I wish that I could make it there,

But I think that it is everywhere,

That we make it happen.

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Comments: 27

tammie p. Jan 21, 2009, 8:29am EST
very pretty
Sandra H. Jan 21, 2009, 8:30am EST
Lovely Christine! Nice job!
DIANE D. Jan 21, 2009, 8:40am EST
This is wonderful , thanks for shaing~
Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Jan 21, 2009, 8:46am EST
Very nice.
ashley a. Jan 21, 2009, 8:46am EST
beautiful
Lin B. Jan 21, 2009, 8:47am EST
This is wonderful
Alex In Wonderland Jan 21, 2009, 8:53am EST
Very nice!
Kat W. Jan 21, 2009, 9:54am EST
Well done, Christine!
rainne chandler Jan 21, 2009, 9:55am EST
it was lovely
Rebecca [Future Teacher] Jan 21, 2009, 10:10am EST
If only we could find that place
Nana to Seven Cutiepies Jan 21, 2009, 10:17am EST
Nice poem!
Stacey *Mamasaid* D. Jan 21, 2009, 10:18am EST
What a nice place...
Bert Van Essen Jan 21, 2009, 10:59am EST
Very Good-well written-thought out-I wish your wish would come true.
Cindy B. Jan 21, 2009, 11:51am EST
Great poem! =)
Trish A. Jan 21, 2009, 12:23pm EST
So very true!
Laurie R. Jan 21, 2009, 2:00pm EST
nice job Christine.
Linda T. Jan 21, 2009, 4:37pm EST
Lovely
Christy F. Jan 21, 2009, 5:12pm EST
I wish we could too. Great write!
Kris P. Jan 21, 2009, 6:36pm EST
Very positive outlook there.
Mary Standard Jan 21, 2009, 11:17pm EST
Very nice poem, Christine!!! =0)
Cortney R. Jan 22, 2009, 12:43am EST
That was really nice.
Steph-in-NE ..... Jan 22, 2009, 3:17am EST
Hey that is nice,, I have room for you in my heart
wherethere is endless supply of love ans support,,

no wait you are here already thanks for sharing
Courtney C. Jan 22, 2009, 5:20pm EST
Very nice
Elaine S. Jan 23, 2009, 9:49am EST
very nice
Cynthia T. Jan 23, 2009, 3:54pm EST
that was nice
Nancy R. will view, may comment! Jan 23, 2009, 8:04pm EST
beautiful
Priscilla P. Jan 26, 2009, 10:20pm EST
I tried to make it happen but it didn't. Now I just give love silently and neither wish nor expect any in return. It is quite liberating.

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