by Jae F.
Member since:
June 12, 2007

The Walk

August 30, 2007 08:47 PM EDT
views: 24 | rating: 10/10 (8 votes) | comments: 8

You walked with me,
The aisle paved with rose petals,
Kissed my check as you lifted the veil.

I walked with you,
As you held his tiny hand
Taking him on his first fishing trip.

I walked with you,
As time slipped away
Leaving little to decide, appreciating each and every day.

I walked with you,
Our last day
Placed a rose for you as I whispered your name.
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Comments: 8

Joe Corso Aug 30, 2007, 9:07pm EDT
That's beautiful.
Heidianna "Coriander" T. Aug 30, 2007, 10:14pm EDT
I agree with Nan - this really got to me. Very beautiful sentiments.
Jae F. Aug 30, 2007, 11:24pm EDT
I was thinking of my dad today. I miss him very much. Thanks every body!!
Barbara L. Aug 31, 2007, 3:06am EDT
Oh Jae!!!
Jerri H. Aug 31, 2007, 5:07pm EDT
That was beautiful!!!! Thanks Jae!!
James B. Sep 2, 2007, 8:37am EDT
Very nice.
Mary (diet dr pepper junkie) T. Sep 3, 2007, 12:48pm EDT
made me cry...thanks Jae. Some days the losses get
to me more than others, too -

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