by El Toro Bravo de Amor
Member since:
November 9, 2006

drought haiku

September 27, 2008 03:59 PM EDT
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drought~
the well fills
with echoes
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Comments: 11

WS R. Sep 27, 2008, 4:45pm EDT
Good one. Fits in well with CA.
Amber M. Sep 27, 2008, 5:09pm EDT
great haiku
Cheryl W. Sep 27, 2008, 5:30pm EDT
Awesome. It has a haunting quality to it. The photo is a perfect companion to this...:)
El Toro Bravo de Amor Sep 27, 2008, 5:57pm EDT
Thanks you incredibly insightful and lucid people
Stephannie H. Sep 28, 2008, 7:32am EDT
thanks for sharing with us
Barbra L. Oct 5, 2008, 9:04pm EDT
You’ve woven a superb haiku with just six words by capturing the presence of the moment with uncomplicated language that appeals to the reader's intuition. The image is a beautiful collaboration that will stay in one's mind for a long time.

Outstanding, Bret!
El Toro Bravo de Amor Oct 6, 2008, 9:12am EDT
thx all.

Barabara, I'll use you for the dust jacket blurb. ;)
Ruth Luce Oct 26, 2008, 3:59pm EDT
Living in the Sonoran, I can relate, very well put, can't even say that it's bad Bret!
Peregrine * Mar 9, 2009, 9:35am EDT
drought~
the well fills
with echoes

It does.

The rattle of sand
against stone
rushes into the river
Peregrine * Mar 9, 2009, 10:20am EDT
...and by "it does" I mean to say,
I bow to the haiku master.
El Toro Bravo de Amor Mar 9, 2009, 10:53pm EDT
You are too kind ever resurrecting mythical one

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