by El Toro Bravo de Amor
Member since:
November 9, 2006

Solemn spring: haiku

April 29, 2008 12:53 AM EDT (Updated: April 29, 2008 08:42 PM EDT)
views: 37 | rating: 10/10 (6 votes) | comments: 11

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

solemn spring---
deep inside her pale grey eyes
a gentle rain
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Comments: 11

*LORA* M. Apr 29, 2008, 1:57am EDT
pretty
*LORA* M. Apr 29, 2008, 1:57am EDT
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LeeAnn D. Apr 29, 2008, 9:18am EDT
Ooooh. That was very nice.
El Toro Bravo de Amor Apr 29, 2008, 8:44pm EDT
*Thanks Lora!!!*

That's as close as I can approximate a graphic. :)

Thx LeeAnn, arleen!
Atticus *. Apr 30, 2008, 10:02pm EDT
Lovely
Founding Editor Apr 30, 2008, 11:35pm EDT
very powerful
TanTrum Napolde May 1, 2008, 6:38pm EDT
You seem to have a theme going with sight/eyes. =P pretty
El Toro Bravo de Amor May 1, 2008, 10:40pm EDT
Thanks TanTrum. Its the same way when I write songs. I mine a theme or a groove till it can't find anythng shiny left in it.

Obliged Lrical, my honorable haijin.

Thanks for saying so Atticus.
Founding Editor May 20, 2008, 1:58am EDT
this is truly lovely.
Ruth Luce May 25, 2008, 6:17am EDT
Absolutely beautiful Bret, you never cease to amaze and surprise me!!
El Toro Bravo de Amor May 26, 2008, 12:44pm EDT
Thx LP! I liked it 'cause it felt soft. This isn't one you "author" it's more like a haiku you find on the beach. You don't create them, you just notice the shape and brush the sand off.

Thanks RUTH you beautiful and luminous creature.

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