by El Toro Bravo de Amor
Member since:
November 9, 2006

tangled hair haiku

December 26, 2007 05:07 PM EST
views: 23 | rating: 10/10 (7 votes) | comments: 11
winter morning-
my hair still tangled
in last night's dream
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Comments: 11

Ricky Fico Dec 26, 2007, 5:20pm EST
I know that feeling! Now where's my toupe?

Monuments 4 Life

Very nice Haiku by the way. I feel like Hairy Houdini all of a sudden!
Cheryl W. Dec 26, 2007, 6:14pm EST
oh..good one, Bret. Love this!
El Toro Bravo de Amor Dec 27, 2007, 1:59am EST
thx C. I had one of those dreams. Where you wake up but it still feels like you are in dreamland a little bit
Becks N. Dec 28, 2007, 12:11am EST
I get that everyday. Constant state of hypnagogia. Its sad actually because I have the most awesome dreams then to my hatred I REALLY wake-up. Aaaargh!

I love Haiku btw, I'm going to borrow the imagery to explain why my hair looks the way it looks! Nosey person: Becks did you comb your hair today... Me: Oh, that, its still tangled up in last night's dream.... very romantic.

Going through your articles :-)
El Toro Bravo de Amor Dec 28, 2007, 12:26am EST
Always happy to supply someone with a lame excuse for slovenly behavior. :) I'll be coming to you for one someday so be prepared.

I had a dream where I was backstage with Fleetwood Mac. It was my birthday. They surprised me with a cake. Stevie was carrying it. She looked so happy! The candles lighting up her face. Lindsey Buckingham gave me a Stratocaster. I hated waking from that one. I eventually had to buy my own Strat.
Becks N. Dec 28, 2007, 12:47am EST
Fleetwood Mac did what? And a strat no less! I'm jealous. Lol!! I would have hated to wake up from that one too! Some dreams do that to you where you just have to capture some of it in reality. My superhero comic-buying tendencies depend on which ass-kicking hero I was in my dream.

Slovenly suggests carelessness. Nothing careless about my behaviour.
El Toro Bravo de Amor Dec 28, 2007, 1:17am EST
So don't brush your hair. I'll back you up.
Founding Editor Jan 12, 2008, 1:40pm EST
lol...this is a great haiku.

I miss reading great work
El Toro Bravo de Amor Jan 12, 2008, 3:49pm EST
thx LP. I go through long non haiku periods. For some reason, I can't write haiku and everything else too. I have to write ONLY haiku. That part of my brain doesn't multi task. Its odd.
El Toro Bravo de Amor Feb 10, 2008, 10:05pm EST
Akiko! There should be a satue of her in every major city! I can't believe she isn't required reading.
El Toro Bravo de Amor Feb 11, 2008, 8:58am EST
thx cv!

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