Escape

I hope the hope shall spread to shatter the set up. This is the best I have read today. You have made my day.

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Thank you for your kind comment, Poddar.

Wow this one hits hard - powerful poem Cheryl!  It hit me right in the gut!

Hope the hairline crack turns into a pane of escape.  Wonderful Cheryl.

And beyond? lies what potential?

Starkly beautiful and chilling Cheryl. Love that: "etched in a hairline crack"

Great poem, my friend. Thought provoking. Thank you for posting to our group.

A nice verse with deep thoughts

oft hope be the only grounds

to which our buriel will be found

Tight makes words speak loudly. Very well done.

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the route 'out'!

thanks for sharing..

Thank you, everyone....for your kind comments

Oooh, so real, gritty and awesome!

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very powerful

The tone is very sad, but there is hope and it's worth giving your all to find it.