by Jodi V.
Member since:
June 7, 2007

Reaction to Dave's Sunset, 8/29/07

August 30, 2007 01:20 AM EDT (Updated: August 30, 2007 01:37 AM EDT)
views: 18 | comments: 9

 

Orange soda oil slick on the surface of the sea

Cotton candy clouds puffed and fluffy as can be 

Lots of dots of lavender float by

In line across the pastel sky

Never has the sun bid adieu so brilliantly

 

 

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Comments: 9

Dan (Cowboy Up) V. Aug 30, 2007, 1:33am EDT
Good job! Very nice & descriptive Jodi! Now I really AM going to bed! lol C):-)
flit . Aug 30, 2007, 3:47am EDT
works for me
Denise B. Aug 30, 2007, 7:45am EDT
very nice.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Aug 30, 2007, 12:13pm EDT
Judi this is lovely...and your smiling face too..


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Dave W. Aug 30, 2007, 12:30pm EDT
very nice!
Janet "Jax" B. Aug 30, 2007, 11:34pm EDT
great job Jodi....I see Dave even saw it.
Pher B. Sep 3, 2007, 8:35pm EDT
very nice ms. Jodi
Missy Cline Sep 4, 2007, 11:29am EDT
lovely!
Barbara N. Sep 8, 2007, 10:24am EDT
Very nice Jodi... very nice

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