by Jenn G.
Member since:
January 26, 2007

Another beautiful day

August 09, 2007 11:20 PM EDT
views: 50 | rating: 10/10 (14 votes) | comments: 45

Just another beautiful day

As I wake up to the birds outside at play

The beauty that surrounds, it is in more than abounds

A Love that I have a desire to share

To show you that I truly care

A smile and a hug, for that’s what I love

Being close to you, I feel forever renewed

Time does freeze as we embrace in this moment

Seeing the smile on your face

The way that my heart seems to race

Your eyes sparkle with the light, oh what a beautiful site’

Love shown in many different ways,

Always and forever cherished in this heart of mine

To you my love I want to say….

I love you more and more every day

I love you, in many different ways
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Comments: 45

Randy- Being true to myself Aug 9, 2007, 11:22pm EDT
This is really sweet Jenn
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 9, 2007, 11:22pm EDT
Somebody is very lucky
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 9, 2007, 11:29pm EDT
This is pretty, and shows such a deep love for someone special
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 9, 2007, 11:30pm EDT
By the way-love th eteddy bear
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 9, 2007, 11:41pm EDT
Seeing a person's smile that you love does bring such happiness to your heart Jenn.
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 9, 2007, 11:41pm EDT
Sparkling eyes with happiness is truly a real gift....
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 10, 2007, 12:03am EDT
I know that this special person sure knows how special they are to you jenn
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 10, 2007, 12:03am EDT
I hope that person cares as much about you too
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 10, 2007, 12:03am EDT
Don't you love that feeling of growing love?
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 10, 2007, 12:04am EDT
Love is such a precious feeling for sure
Karen M. Aug 10, 2007, 12:18am EDT
What a nice piece Jenn.
Karen M. Aug 10, 2007, 12:18am EDT
You really let those feelings show in it.
Karen M. Aug 10, 2007, 12:25am EDT
Nothing beats a smile...
Nic P. Aug 10, 2007, 12:42am EDT
=)
Sue D. Aug 10, 2007, 1:08am EDT
A very touching and beautiful poem.
beautiful emotions your love shines though your words jen
very good work keepit up
cda asfc Aug 10, 2007, 2:07am EDT
What a beautiful piece.
Alena Chauntee AKA Kitten Aug 10, 2007, 3:37am EDT
Very lovely Jen.
Christine P. Aug 10, 2007, 9:29am EDT
My favorite verse, "Love shown in many different ways,: So very true.:)
Christine P. Aug 10, 2007, 9:33am EDT
Jenn, by the way your poem is very beautiful!
Words, for love to me: honor, respect, trust, unconditional love and so many more.:)
Angela W. Aug 10, 2007, 9:59am EDT
I love sunny days!
golds g. Aug 10, 2007, 11:04am EDT
great poem
golds g. Aug 10, 2007, 11:05am EDT
the photo that goes with it is a 10+
golds g. Aug 10, 2007, 11:05am EDT
you obviously have talent
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 10, 2007, 12:53pm EDT
it is another beautiful day for sure Jenn
Randy- Being true to myself Aug 10, 2007, 12:54pm EDT
I bet you get lots of smiles and hugs
Christine P. Aug 10, 2007, 2:26pm EDT
A wonderful and sentimental poem.
Christine P. Aug 10, 2007, 2:27pm EDT
I believe It's even to hot in SW MN for the birds to sing.;)
Alena Chauntee AKA Kitten Aug 10, 2007, 5:00pm EDT
I love great poetry
Alena Chauntee AKA Kitten Aug 10, 2007, 5:00pm EDT
What lovely words
Paula Love Aug 10, 2007, 8:22pm EDT
thanks for the comment here is one
Paula Love Aug 10, 2007, 8:23pm EDT
here is your second one
Paula Love Aug 10, 2007, 8:23pm EDT
and since you left me two, here is the third
Paula Love Aug 10, 2007, 8:23pm EDT
and yay I have you complete with four!
Paula Love Aug 10, 2007, 9:43pm EDT
Hey, don't worry about trying to comment back! we're good okay?
Christine P. Aug 10, 2007, 10:10pm EDT
I had to read you poem again as it makes me gives thanks for the day.:)
wiaka's just ... curious Aug 11, 2007, 12:44am EDT
This is sweet .... its wonderful poetry

Blessings
wiaka's just ... curious Aug 11, 2007, 12:46am EDT
I wish someone would write something like this to me ....

Blessings
wiaka's just ... curious Aug 11, 2007, 12:47am EDT
I love the way you opened it up ...

Blessings
wiaka's just ... curious Aug 11, 2007, 12:50am EDT
I love your teddy bear ... to me me it shows through the years we are weathered with life together and bond together forever.

did that make sense?

Blessings
arlene (no shame in my game) w. Aug 12, 2007, 6:03pm EDT
Good job! That should be on a Halmark card!
arlene (no shame in my game) w. Aug 12, 2007, 6:04pm EDT
Thanks for the birthday wish Jenn!
Sue D. Aug 13, 2007, 9:08pm EDT
I owe you some comments.
Denise E. Mar 11, 2008, 3:57pm EDT
Beautiful poem!
Jen G. Jan 20, 2009, 8:19pm EST
Very good poem Jenn!

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