by Cheryl W.
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December 10, 2005

The Breeze

October 12, 2008 02:32 PM EDT
views: 44 | comments: 15
There is peace within a breeze...
calming our spirits
like the gentle hand of God,

flowing over us, through us...
sun's cooling relief,
drying the tears that we cry.

Trees dance with joyous whispers...
kites flit amongst clouds,
wind chimes ring with abandon;

The breeze carries our laughter...
nature's joyous song,
music that touches heaven.
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Comments: 15

Janie E. Oct 12, 2008, 2:35pm EDT
Sweet poem, Cheryl!!!!
Sandra L. Oct 12, 2008, 2:39pm EDT
flowing over us, through us...
sun's cooling relief,
drying the tears that we cry.

I love this part. It's beautiful.
Ladybounty ~. Oct 12, 2008, 2:47pm EDT
beautiful and as uplifting as a lovely breeze, Cheryl!
I have tons of windchimes and windspinners on my big front porch....to see the power and hear the music of the wind....
Cheryl W. Oct 12, 2008, 3:26pm EDT
Oops. I had written a poem right before this one, but thought i had lost it in the editing process. Therefore I wrote this one, which is very similar, but a bit different than the first one. I apologize for the mix-up. I suppose people can decide which version they prefer...lol
Elaine S. Oct 12, 2008, 3:34pm EDT
I Like this Cheryl
Larry H. Oct 12, 2008, 4:39pm EDT
THANKS FOR SHARING ..
Bounder .. Oct 12, 2008, 4:57pm EDT
excellent poem. Wind is cool, unless you are pedaling a bicycle into it.
Leah Christensen Oct 12, 2008, 5:15pm EDT
A job well done.
J W. Oct 12, 2008, 6:55pm EDT
very nice
Digital Diva S. Oct 12, 2008, 7:47pm EDT
Thanks for posting this to Best Original Photos, Art and Writing for 2008
Shelbia C. Oct 13, 2008, 11:23am EDT
I like this
MYKE D. Oct 13, 2008, 6:05pm EDT
I can feel the breeze you are talking about. It swirls about me and through the pines like a whisper while I am riding the canyon trails on my horse.

Myke

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