by Shelbia C.
Member since:
November 19, 2006

Simply Put

February 15, 2009 11:41 PM EST (Updated: March 02, 2009 07:46 PM EST)
views: 153 | comments: 29

I look to you
As hot tears hit the ground.
You reach out to me
And true love is found
Not by word
Or even gesture.
Just by your mere presence.

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Comments: 29

Leah Christensen Feb 15, 2009, 11:46pm EST
Thanks for posting this.
Sue T. Feb 16, 2009, 12:02am EST
Beautiful, and much said in few words.
Sandra H. Feb 16, 2009, 3:51am EST
Very nice!
Jean E. Feb 16, 2009, 11:13am EST
the essence of good writing dear lady ~ simple, eloquent and elegant ~ kudos ~j
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Feb 16, 2009, 11:15am EST
This is beautiful.
Angela A. Feb 16, 2009, 1:52pm EST
Aw, how sweet!!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Penny M. Feb 16, 2009, 4:59pm EST
Thanks for sharing with us at Endless Points
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Jill~Sexy Back~ V. Feb 17, 2009, 2:52am EST
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Svetlana Goryacheva Feb 20, 2009, 5:40am EST
Yeah, just "mere presence"... pure and simple! ;-)

Blessings and best wishes - S.
Lisa Frost Feb 20, 2009, 9:45am EST
simple and beautiful! excellence at its best!
William Dotani Feb 23, 2009, 12:07am EST
The last line is powerful and brings your inner heart into focus.
denise e Feb 23, 2009, 4:14pm EST
thanks
Charity M. Feb 25, 2009, 5:58am EST
((( DEARLY PUT )))
Sheila Deeth Feb 27, 2009, 9:08pm EST
Just by presence. Lovely.
William Dotani Feb 28, 2009, 1:44am EST
Came back to reread.
William Dotani Feb 28, 2009, 1:45am EST
That last line is about as perfect as any line I've ever read. It really makes this an excellent poem.
Amy just hangin' out M. Mar 1, 2009, 11:37am EST
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David W. Mar 2, 2009, 7:48pm EST
Touching and to the point. Nice work.
Linda T. Mar 2, 2009, 8:57pm EST
sometimes love just happens with no prelude.
Marsha S. Mar 5, 2009, 10:56am EST
that's nice
kelly R. Mar 5, 2009, 11:05am EST
nice
Renee (Pres of Baby James Foundation) ~. Mar 5, 2009, 11:23am EST
Good job
Nora C. Mar 5, 2009, 1:46pm EST
Cool
Marsha S. Mar 6, 2009, 10:12am EST
Just letting you know your content has reached 25 comments and has therefore been removed from ~3,000 Here We Come!~
regina k. Mar 10, 2009, 6:26am EDT
nice
lovely and touching~

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