by Jaime R.

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May 25, 2007

Let me in (a little poem)

January 08, 2008 12:03 PM EST

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Icy whispers from your kiss

Lonely desires cut into my abyss

Lifeless tears haunt love

Let me in

Tags: poems, poem, poetry

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Comments: 18

Dena A. Jan 8, 2008, 12:22pm EST

cute lil poem!

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Spencer T. Jan 8, 2008, 12:26pm EST

With such few words you conveyed the yearning and need of one who is not as open as they should be.
Good stuff.

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Alison H. Jan 8, 2008, 12:37pm EST

Very nice! You say a lot with few words.

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Nancy S. Jan 8, 2008, 1:16pm EST

Nice one Jaime.

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Randee "The Court Jester of LaLa Land ! ! !" always and forever, I just want to celebrate Jan 8, 2008, 1:16pm EST

cool poem Jaime,
pun intended.....
Thanks!!!

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J W. Jan 8, 2008, 2:39pm EST

good poem

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Bethany C. Jan 8, 2008, 4:10pm EST

Glad to see your poetry here. Chilling.

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Erin S. Jan 8, 2008, 6:48pm EST

Men. What more can I say?

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Mark D. Jan 8, 2008, 7:21pm EST

I can feel it!

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Mark D. Jan 8, 2008, 7:24pm EST

Women! lol

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Heather W. Jan 8, 2008, 9:28pm EST

Great poem. I'm glad to see you are back to posting them.

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Karyn K. Jan 8, 2008, 10:21pm EST

Nice poem

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Cindie B. Jan 9, 2008, 2:47am EST

beautiful said.

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Teresa A. Jan 9, 2008, 5:58am EST

Nice

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Sandra T. Jan 9, 2008, 7:33pm EST

Very nice poem!

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The Red Headed Witch of Gather G. Jan 21, 2008, 10:58am EST

very strong

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Shelbia C. Jun 5, 2008, 2:03am EDT

Good poem. I like it.

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