by Barbara B.

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PEACE A POEM BY KELSEY

October 09, 2007 04:49 PM EDT

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Peace is just someone being alone with no one talking.

People like peace.

Peace is a good thing.

Peace is just something thats flows along.

Love is like peace. A lot of people love each other.

Everyone has peace inside of them.

When you care for someone you give peace out to

the person you're caring for.

You bring peace to yourself when you care for someone else.

Peace is a symbol of friendship.

Friendship brings happiness.

Happines is a part of peace.

Beauty is a symbol of peace to me.

It should be a symbol of peace to everybody else.

Written by Kelsey R. Sherman grade 4 age 9 1/2 10/o8/07

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Comments: 51

Tiffany G. Oct 9, 2007, 4:52pm EDT

She is an amazing writer!!! Thats a great poem!! Tell her thanks!!

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Barbara B. Oct 9, 2007, 4:53pm EDT

My grand girl amazes me with the things she
writes about. I do love this one it is special.

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Marge H. Oct 9, 2007, 6:14pm EDT

Very astute for a 9 1/2 year old. Excellent. I've also given her a 10.

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Sue * Oct 9, 2007, 6:51pm EDT

Out of the mouths of children....sometimes they are smarter than grownups!

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~~ Sarina ~~ Oct 9, 2007, 8:46pm EDT

Kelsey, you are are such a good writer. I am proud to be your Aunt.

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Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Oct 9, 2007, 10:20pm EDT

That was very good.

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Donald M. Oct 9, 2007, 10:38pm EDT

Kelsey that was great. You will be a great writer some day.

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William Dotani Oct 10, 2007, 1:16am EDT

Very nice. It is wonderful she is writing poetry. I enjoyed the message and the consistency of theme in her poem.

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Syed The Shah Oct 10, 2007, 4:54am EDT

This sure a beautiful piece, this child is very bright talented and loves peace.
Thank for sahring this work of little angel.

Shah

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Larry H. Oct 10, 2007, 1:11pm EDT

Thanks for sharing the poem, very nice..

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Elsie Duggan Oct 11, 2007, 12:51am EDT

This is very good Kelsey, tell her that for me will you Grandma, she is a very gifted little girl in her writing abilities.

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Peter Joseph Swanson Oct 11, 2007, 12:37pm EDT

That was wonderful!!!

(and peace to YOU!)

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William Dotani Oct 11, 2007, 6:05pm EDT

Now Kelsey needs to tell us a ghost story.

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William Dotani Oct 11, 2007, 6:05pm EDT

Maybe a ghost story with an Elvis theme.

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Peg Doak Oct 11, 2007, 9:16pm EDT

Kelsey rocks!

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Donald M. Oct 12, 2007, 3:41pm EDT

I think Kelsy is doing so great, Did you tell her Barbara that I think she is older than her years. She is starting young on expressing her feelings. And what a grand job she does.

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Donald M. Oct 12, 2007, 3:42pm EDT

Sorry I havent been around as much, but I just cant seem to get caught up. Gee I am still three hundred emails behind on answering. I try to get around to everyone, but sometimes my feeble mind forgets.

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Marge H. Oct 12, 2007, 9:34pm EDT

Just dropping by to read this again. It's just as lovely the second time around. Such wisdom for someone so young.

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Dena Straughn Oct 14, 2007, 12:32am EDT

Incredible for such a young age. WOW!

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Barbara B. Oct 14, 2007, 4:12pm EDT

Kelsey was supposed to come over today and
take care of your comments. I told her if she
wanted to write stories she would have to
answer all your comments.

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Ylanne Sorrows Oct 15, 2007, 8:16pm EDT

I love this poem, it is so sweet and evocative of childhood innocence. I enjoy writing poetry, but the voice of a young child is often the simplest and most clear.

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Jai S. Oct 16, 2007, 8:50pm EDT

Barbie;
I really enjoyed this poem. Kelsey is blessed with deep, clear thinking and tremendous writing skills. Yes, peace is what we all need with each other and with our God the creator of everything.
PEACE and hugs to you my sister Barbie ;)))

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Bonnie S. Oct 17, 2007, 10:11am EDT

That is a great poem for someone so young, I enjoyed it.

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Glenn T. Oct 19, 2007, 1:04pm EDT

Beautiful thoughts, Kelsey. Thanks, Barbara!

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Donald M. Oct 21, 2007, 3:44pm EDT

barbara you have a verry talented granddauther the poem is great ,,,,donald m.....

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Midnite Writer -- Kim Oct 23, 2007, 9:03pm EDT

Beautiful, flowing poem. Great message she has. Thanks!

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Midnite Writer -- Kim Oct 23, 2007, 9:04pm EDT

Thanks for voting for me today, I know the link was giving some people a hassle but I appreciate you taking time from your day to help me out :).

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Jule's dreamin of a wonderfilled life for all research mode again Oct 24, 2007, 12:34am EDT

Oh it is wonderful! my grand son will be nine soon~youngest wrote a poem for here when he was here last summer
I miss him

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Christine Zibas Oct 26, 2007, 11:37pm EDT

From the mouths of babes...

This is great! Thanks for sharing it. Lets hope she continues to write poetry for a long time!

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April H. Oct 29, 2007, 1:53am EDT

Great poem tell her for me.

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Wilma M. Oct 30, 2007, 12:41pm EDT

Wonderful poem, Kelsey! You have expressed some beautiful thoughts here.

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Wilma M. Oct 30, 2007, 12:42pm EDT

Barbara, thanks for your MANY comments the last week. When I am working, I just don't get to Gather very much. So now I have over 100 comments to return, many from you!!

Have to get caught up on your story.

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