by Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S.

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December 28, 2007

Marvel intacts, unquestionable !!! Poetry Please ......

December 17, 2008 03:57 AM EST (Updated: December 26, 2008 09:52 AM EST)

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Blunder not they are collects

Each chosen piece a marvel

In the show-case !

Had a long tale to tell,

Yet wonder great

to venture over their state !!

As wishfully agreed to play

Game 'Statue' of the childhood age !!!

Miraculous agreement we love them

Again shelved to test a bee bit-wit

Delay the next scene-scripted

Just a play unearthed detail !

Magnificent in sensed sense pay

In respecting the adage of 'Tall-tale-mates'

In fear of forgeting not yet forgiving the

Other to ask questions

Of their mute presence !!

A secret, a wisdom, scrolled to stay ...

Trait thrilling as persistent patience,

Why you let them remain amusing

In maze and gaze, yet not dazed !!!

Yes accepted to withstand prominent

Stead showcased intact enough in glass,

Delicate inmates holding every string

Seen, unseen-subtle, tinsle, exquisite love

Decor interior of substance !

As ever-abiding Faith, Omnipresent

Justifying mind's likeness pursuit beyond

Is "Real state Pure and Conscious,

Watchful-ever unpertubed existent" !!

No one in household, all 'n' every

Ever did cross-question to oppose lo

Their Static 'Being' - Only love portrayed !!!

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Did I again mention the presence of God

Or of Angels unaware, Loveably able, in mute display

to pay in Life worthy Every Day Possessed mundane !!!

Tags: poetry please, single word, static prompt, marvel intact, statue, shelfed, omnipresent, being only love

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 17, 2008, 7:23am EST

Oh dear Selene !

Yes I can then master to fly, walk, dance

on the blessed hot-air of your flying words

While honoring my trance offered duly as prompted !!!

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JustMe ~I'm happy to be~ Dec 17, 2008, 1:55pm EST

I cannot find anything to add past Selene's majestic words........

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 17, 2008, 9:13pm EST

Am so happy to be read and know you all did love the sightful

In honor static I gratefully Thank you ...

Thank you dear Selsene ...!!!

Thank you dear Marsha ...!!!

Thank you dear JustMe ...!!!

Thank you Dear Marilyn ... !!!

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Lisa Frost Dec 17, 2008, 10:03pm EST

Beautiful and insightful words woven to pleasing poetry.

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 18, 2008, 6:36am EST

That's love Lisa, thankyou so much !

I know you for your generosity and kind words

in compliment to encourage is so my due privilege !!!

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Dove D. Dec 18, 2008, 9:20am EST

Thanks for posting to Glam it up with Graphics!

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 18, 2008, 9:28am EST

Wow that's dreamlike presence of Santa !

Out of glitter and Glam true !!

All blessing be showered on you dear friend Dove ...

Love to wish merry Christmas, I love you too !!!

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Tracey W. Dec 18, 2008, 7:15pm EST

That was lovely Sujata. I especially liked these lines. Stead showcased intact enough in glass,/Delicate inmates holding every string I like the imagery they conjure. Nice job!

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 18, 2008, 8:40pm EST

Wow that's the 'Truth - Beauty' actually a feeling of your core 'Being' Selene !

This state of being we often try our best to put in words - struggling desperately

to bring forth the experience of this felt 'truht - Beauty' resonate well, while

commuting to others ... yet we are unable to make the other feel

the impact whole and sole !!

Becoz this experience is just a glimpse and touch of the soul - the inner core of

our being which is whole cannot be explained in 'lil-mere' words, as utterences

only disturbs this state 'Static' or "mute-pure-existence of our actual entity unit

is 'Unity' undivided unit,

call it love or beauty or God and it's glimpse and touch as

the Angles or miracles happening out of the world feeling !!!

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 18, 2008, 11:37pm EST

Love you Tracey for you sight and insight to move

Elegantly encouraging with apt and kind words duly

irrespective of our natural bent of mind cognitive !!!

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Svetlana Goryacheva Dec 20, 2008, 10:00am EST

Very well done, my dear friend... breathtaking! ;-)

Hugs and blessings - S.

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Jodie B. Dec 20, 2008, 12:07pm EST

Thank you for sharing.

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Sandy (back in Ohio...blah!) Dec 20, 2008, 1:10pm EST

I believe God is all around us.

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Sandy (back in Ohio...blah!) Dec 20, 2008, 1:10pm EST

Thanks for posting to the Prayer Circle

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 21, 2008, 11:17am EST

Thank you Minipin !

Your addition is super-din !!

Love Your presence naturally so keen !!!

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 21, 2008, 11:19am EST

Honored dear friend so much to thanh you Jodie gratefully !!!

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 21, 2008, 11:22am EST

Oh am too gratefully mean to thank you dear Svetlana !!

Always so apt and blissfully Blessed to enhance and encourage !!!

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Sheila Deeth Dec 22, 2008, 9:24pm EST

Another fun one.

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 23, 2008, 9:04am EST

Thankfully remain blessed dear Sheila

with your honest visit to stay !!

Happy Thoughts and Merry Christmas !!!

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Barbra L. Dec 23, 2008, 5:02pm EST

Did I again mention the presence of God
Or of Angels unaware...

I loved these lines, Sujata. God Bless You.

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Dec 23, 2008, 8:39pm EST

Oh God bless you dear Barbra !

My work is complete now so understood !!

Love you and your and wish all the best of

season's Greetings, A Very Merry Christmas !!!

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Diane "stormyz" B. Dec 26, 2008, 7:31pm EST

Here's a 10 for you!! Thank you for posting this to the Gimme 10!!! Group

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William Dotani Jan 2, 2009, 12:44am EST

You love is in everything seems to follow a Hindu religious theme. You certainly twist your syntax for metaphor.

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Kimber L. Jan 5, 2009, 9:38pm EST

Thank you for posting to Make me Laugh

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Michelle W. Jan 11, 2009, 6:28pm EST

Wonderful post!

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Haim Kadman Jan 14, 2009, 1:53pm EST

Very impressive poem Sujata, well done.

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William Dotani Jan 28, 2009, 3:30am EST

You start as if in a museum and then you quite qickly expand to a world view and from this roller coaster ride state philosophies. Quite an interesting format. Nice word texturing.

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