by Amanda S.

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Garden Gate

July 09, 2008 11:55 AM EDT

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The sun was on fire

IN the sky

And in its warth

Flowers open

In the Garden

And the butterfly

Flutters by.

Wings widespread

It stops to feed

At the flower bed

And on its favourite flower

the butterfly settles

Like two extra petals.

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Comments: 15

Amanda S. Jul 9, 2008, 12:02pm EDT

I'm finding it really easy to write peotry and other things,somebody told me its really hard to write poetry let alone anything else that's worth reading.

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Dan H. Jul 9, 2008, 12:25pm EDT

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http://friendsofdanh.gather.com.
Our goal is to help you further your exposure and to support other gather members.

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Michelle W. Jul 9, 2008, 12:27pm EDT

very nice, thanks!

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John S. (arizona) Jul 9, 2008, 12:48pm EDT

Nice one. I'm not much good at it, and also have trouble understanding it at times. Doesn't mean I don't like it though, ha ha.

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Leigh M. Jul 9, 2008, 2:47pm EDT

very nice

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Sandy (back in Ohio...blah!) Jul 9, 2008, 2:51pm EDT

wow

..great job

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Amanda S. Jul 9, 2008, 6:01pm EDT

Thank you all very much for commenting on this.
I was watching a butterfly this morning in the flower garden and suddenly I just had these words in my mind and knew I had to share them.
I'm glad you all liked it.

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Robin G. Jul 9, 2008, 6:38pm EDT

nice

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Robin G. Jul 9, 2008, 6:38pm EDT

Thank You for sharing with us at PointMonster

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Mary G. Jul 9, 2008, 10:04pm EDT

10

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Diane "stormyz" B. Jul 10, 2008, 1:02am EDT

Very nice!

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Diane "stormyz" B. Jul 10, 2008, 1:02am EDT

Here's a 10 for you!! Thank you for posting this to the Gimme 10!!! Group

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Amanda S. Jul 17, 2008, 11:22am EDT

Thanks for commenting on this.

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