by Heather C.
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May 8, 2007

Without Love

August 01, 2007 01:05 PM EDT (Updated: August 01, 2007 01:06 PM EDT)
views: 27 | comments: 9

    
                            
Written June 28, 1998

Without love

life is pretty pale.

Without love

its a sad sad tale.

Without love

I'm just an empty shell.

Without love

there's nothing much to tell.

With love,

you can soar as eagles do.

With love,

there is no me, without you.

With love,

there is not a day of rain.

With love,

it lessens all the pain.

Without you,

my world would be a mess.

Without you,

I wouldn't be at my best.

Without you,

I would have a day of rest.

Without you,

Life is a bore, I must confess.

With you,

I have someone who cares.

With you,

I can handle all the stares.

With you,

I can tackle any feat.

With you,

I feel that I'm complete.

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Comments: 9

Mary Beth Magee Aug 1, 2007, 1:24pm EDT
Thanks, Heather! Charming verse...
Jamie ~grant me the serenity..~ G. Aug 1, 2007, 2:00pm EDT
That was very lovely. I thought of my husband the whole time I was reading it. :D
Michelle C. Aug 1, 2007, 2:55pm EDT
Wow...very good. I kinda was writing something to my grandma passed away asking if she loved me? and... then I saw this poem.. so weird.! Very good. Maybe she somehow inspired you? :) lol
Heather C. Aug 1, 2007, 3:19pm EDT
Thanks Mary Beth!

Thanks Don!

Thanks Jamie, I think I was writing about mine, it was my 18th wedding anniversary the day I wrote this.

Thanks Michelle, she probably nudged me to post it! (smile)
James W. Aug 2, 2007, 9:29am EDT
very nice.
Heather C. Aug 3, 2007, 1:18pm EDT
Thanks James!
arlene (no shame in my game) w. Aug 3, 2007, 7:31pm EDT
Very impressive! Sounds like a very nice Valentine's card.
necee t. Feb 14, 2008, 2:35pm EST
this is wonderful, Heather... it applies to humans and God too... lovely...
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