by Heather C.

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May 29, 2007 11:32 PM EDT

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To dare to dream,

To want to seem,

To live to be,

To hear to see,

To love to feel

To be too real

To care to give

To dream to live.

(Critique welcome)

Tags: take a chance, theory of life, life, poem, poetry, people, relationships, writing

To Groups: Life Issues, .....The Poetry Review....., poetry lovers, Random Musings

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Shrimp Cocktail V. May 29, 2007, 11:35pm EDT

wow, this is creative. It may seem simple but i like it, its true and it has a great beat.

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Heather C. May 29, 2007, 11:37pm EDT

Thanks Lora, I wasn't too sure if it was too simple, but I went with it anyway!

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PEACEOWORK :) May 29, 2007, 11:47pm EDT

The repetition of sound works well.

Excellent.

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Sonia M. May 30, 2007, 2:31am EDT

I too like the repetitive To at the start of each line......it gives it a nice lilt when you read it aloud.

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gaelyn k. May 31, 2007, 10:17pm EDT

Love the thought that if we aren't willing to dare how can we possibly live.

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Heather C. May 31, 2007, 11:48pm EDT

Thanks for your comments everyone! I appreciate your thoughts and feedback!

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