There is a read
Might be my good deed
But you won't know, unless I plead
An attempt to find others, to go for the hook
So if you've been, don't bother to look
Eight will be ready, it's still with the cook
With humor and grace
You'll love the pace
Watch me grovel to make my case
A little of your time, I need to borrow
Read one today, another tomorrow
More to come, guaranteed with sorrow
Intrigue and adventure
Are thrown in for good measure
twas thinking of nothing but your reading pleasure
I might be right, I might be wrong
Judge for yourself, if you think it's strong
If you enjoy, then forward along
Before I started, this ditty was toast
Let the comments do the boast
Gather one and all from coast to coast
It is my goal, to provide some fun
For not just a few, but everyone
So without further ado, see what's been Spun
(Try the link, it's spun in color)
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Comments: 154
I am enjoying your novel and getting increasingly curious about Brian's curiosity. It's an intriguing, unique story!
I am running a bit behind....I have looked over your content and wanted you to know I gave you a 10 and appreciate the share and posting to I was bored :)
as fast as I'm able,
To honor the child,
Who was born in a Stable"
Please check out all my other articles and images, and leave lots of praise and high rankings.
I really need connections and to have everyone join my groups.
Hugs, Zissy
"The Night Before Dealine"
Morgan
10 4 u
Seeds of Adversity
Well done Carl. The joys of making your voice heard eh?
The writing's the easy part, innit.
Do some more.................
and so worth the endeavor.
Stories to treasure.
Kudos!
on this line..Were you a spider in a different stage of time?
Thanks for sharing the poem.
I swallered that hook line and sinker
The Scent of Humanity
This will keep you from making so many forced rhymes that interrupt the flow of ideas. Rhymes have no value in and of themselves. Better not to rhyme and be clear, real, and in touch with your emotions, instead.