I thought I'd have some simple fun. Its not in response to any challenge, at least not one outwardly offered. You're welcome to offer improvements.
At last he acts as Atlas
Awkward and accepting the awful accumulation
Baring the blue biosphere, his back bowed not
Broken, bared not bowed, the baneful
Creatures crowd, confidence cancelled, they congregate cautiously
Deceitful deniers of duties they dismissed dispassionately
Earlier escapades exaggerate their eagerness to escape, these
Fawning fools or frightened failures flaunting now flaccid friendships
Gathering ill-gotten golden gods, greedily grabbed their grifters gain
while Atlas acts at last
bent by the borne blue biosphere
cautiously confident
he dutifully dare not dismiss
the exaggerated eagerness
of frightened fools
as gentle good guys at the gate
of heaven
at last as he acts


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well done..I like how the feelings flew over after he finally acts out..
of the gentle gyrations of the great globe....
is this what you are going for Umar?
I'm glad that you stopped before the Q's and the X's.
That was a good exercise in word retrieval. Heroic subject. Well done.
Almost an innocent childlike play at word games with a serious intent.