Another verse another rhyme
Another thought conveys this time
It may be simple or complex
A hint of logic or nonsense
From crosses burned to carefree ways
From those of earth to neon play
We may not wonder this divide
For in such truth both will survive
We may seek truth but there are lies
We may have wants immortalized
A bit of sense yet some slide by
These moments caught then criticized
The winners build as losers vie
The net becomes a blinded eye
For from confusion there is gain
For everything is built to change
As the wind blows the settings change
As something grows to set the flames
This burn it flows with a desire
'Til it is quenched by growing ire
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"This burn it flows with a desire...
"Til it is quenched by growing ire"
I loved it! Thanx much
For everything is built to change"
Believe me or not, dear William, but these are just the words I needed to hear right now. :-)
Blessings and good luck - S.
"10"
Keep writing!
I liked the phrases that Sveta chose. It worked for me too. Thank you for that.
as I thought it was worth reading once more William.
I felt a frustration in it... but maybe it's just how I feel and I put it in the poem?
Confusion and change mark the human condition but it need not be so - there is only this instant; and there is constancy and clarity to be found in it.
I wouldn't exactly call it conventional poetry, and it takes more than one reading, but you have some really good content -- particularly lines like "It may be simple or complex A hint of logic or nonsense", "For in such truth both will survive We may seek truth but there are lies", oh, shucks -- too many to keep copying! Like half the poem! lol
You just keep writing!
Marilyn