by Taken by the Guy I Love 5*15*09 L.
Member since:
June 18, 2007

Out

May 06, 2008 07:13 PM EDT
views: 39 | comments: 3

She gave up

On life and,

On the one thing

She wanted most...

Love.

 

Time and Time over

All she's known

Is hurt

And pain

She's finished

 

By the bathroom sink

A razor blade lies

She wanted

No mistakes

She wanted...

Out

 

Standing 'round

Her eternal resting place

The chosen monument

A broken angel

To represent...

Her broken heart

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Comments: 3

shelly J. May 7, 2008, 5:51am EDT
A very touching and sad piece. It sets a dark mood.But it's definitely good.
Great Write!!!

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