I drank Love
I am feeling high
I can't even walk straight
Some airy thoughts
Making me feel so light
I am a little tipsy
That spirit worked fine
I am
Ecstatic
Restless
Free
I looked in the mirror
Trying to touch my image
I almost looked beautiful
I have tasted divine wine
I am feeling high
I drank love
From your lips
I am
Content
Complete
You
preetidutta @ 05.11.2007


Comments: 43
Love or the ecstacy of being one with everything..
Quite a poem, Amar!
:-)
being intoxicated in love , you loose yourself.
wow
A beautiful sensational ode by Amarpreet.
Bravo! nicely maintained the flow of this ode.
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thanks a lot
Angela : your words honour my poem. I am elated by your comment
Rita : I am glad that you find glimses of life in my poem . thanks a lot for your wonderful comment
Buzy B : here you are with your generous compliments and aprreciations that bright the mood and make you smile wide ..
thank you sweetie
Thanks Lyla for your comment .
gypsy : you have explained t so well , the phycology of this simple act .yes it happens many times in our lives that we are introduced to ourselves , there are events and people that help us in getting closer to real us ... I do it quite often , touch my image and kiss myself ... I am in love with myself ..
Sheila : its take two to tango ..thanks for reading and understanding my poems ..I have missed many of your articles ..toady is the day when I'll be reading them all dear friend .
Erin: I am glad that you could feel it .
J: :-) ..i'll check the articles ..
Elsie : I can't tell you how precious is your comment ...I have felt this(in my dreams ) , yes !! there is nothing in this world like love ...
Patricia : thanks :-)
lovely poem and thanks for sharing for your story .
you should have recorded for friends..
congrats Dear....now that's Diwali dhamaka...
Good going
pata nhn I was dancing ..other's might have done that ..let me chk tomoro and post ..
yup ..had lots of fun ..how are you doing ..
hey send me your mail Id in PM ..:-)
what was the song..?
Good selection...now aur mat tadpaoo
Dancing and sipping wine. In love with life. Flooded with joy. I can understand that.
If you can't be superbly happy at times then how can you ever know what life could be.
Did the Creator want us to be sad and argumentative? Did he not want us to enjoy what he gave to us?
Will you understand if I say why did he give us legs, eyes, lips and cheeks if not to dance, sparkle, sip and glow???
Wonderful Amar. Let me sip a toast to you.
Melody petrudes in ears
love inundates in life's springs
we are nort alone ,in perseverance
drink the celestial fortune as much as you can
life, not a happening in miracles
Enjoy , enjoy and enjoy till the flow touches the soul's brim
we spin in ecstasy
below and high above
potent blend of me and thee
In love with love you write love and feed me.
Thank you amarpreet!
same here:)
I know that you're busy but we really miss your inputs. I hope that you're well .Love
looking around for something sweet to end the evening with and thos poem of yours is perfect..How true the statement to drink love...we drink in everything about that person ...we want to get inside them,smell them feel them taste them..wonderfully free sensation of this.
i also liked the graduated appearance of the parts...wonderful poem!