This is my first attempt to triolet ...and here my focus was to get the sequence right...I hope it qualifies and yes it is difficult to write structured poetry ...and so its more fun ..
When the eyes do the talking
And decipher the voice of heart
Whenever hand in hand we are walking
And when the eyes do the talking
Silently, hand in hand we are walking
Knowing that no distance can keep us apart
When the eyes do the talking
And decipher the voice of heart
02-june-2007 --Amarpreet
rate
email
print
link to this page
Comments: 27
i hope i get better with this , and in gather in company of all you great poets and writers , learn more of structured writing ..
Best wishes,
Marty
you got that right freind ...I have corrected that ..thanks for the same :-)
lisa , same here all I know nothing about structured poetry , all i know is that I like to read poems more than prose and the fact that you can interpret a poem in various ways , so reader also has its share in it ..and the way you recite it adds a different dimension .
But yes I like to try structured poetry and this was my first attempt ..Gather is a real nice place where you have people to guide and help you if you really want to learn / grow and improve ...I feel I am on right path...
Ed, I have read a few of them and will be reading all others soon ..
I read the form in an article by Dragonsoul and tried it .. i enjoyed writing it and its nice to hear that u enjoyed reading that ..
:-)