by melanie j.
Member since:
December 4, 2006

Love gone bad

May 10, 2007 07:35 AM EDT
views: 30 | comments: 8

I feel the comfort in your touch

Would your caressing burn my sweet soul?

I taste the promisses in your kisses

Can a devils kiss be as poisonous as yours?

I see the beauty in your eyes

Should one look make me feel old before my time?

I hear the lust in your whispers

Why is your words a deathwish to my thoughts?

I sense the heartbreak to come..

I know it's the beginning of a love gone wrong

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Comments: 8

Jean E. May 10, 2007, 8:29am EDT
Melanie - good job of using simple words for a huge meaning - kudos
Thom R. May 10, 2007, 8:37am EDT
I know ie's the beginning of a love gone wrong...Yet how long do we linger? Very good write, I agree with Jean
Karolyn Q. May 10, 2007, 2:45pm EDT
Enjoyed it.
melanie j. May 11, 2007, 7:55am EDT
Thank you so much Jean, Thom and Karolyn. Thom we often linger too long..well, atleast until someone gets hurt..
B. Bollocks May 16, 2007, 12:39pm EDT
Indeed!

Lingering - it's what happens when two people in a relationship are silent about issues they need to talk about.
courtney c. May 16, 2007, 9:08pm EDT
I love this. alot of people could relate to it.
melanie j. May 21, 2007, 5:31am EDT
Thank you both Courtney and B Bollocks. You speak true words my friend....

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