by Kristina B.
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January 12, 2008

It's Don Vito Baby! (100 Word Stories Challenge)

April 19, 2008 12:53 PM EDT (Updated: April 19, 2008 12:57 PM EDT)
views: 164 | comments: 33
 

I go to Central Park on my lunch hour.  I love to feed the birds and watch the children play.  Sitting next to a nanny with two young charges happily babbling to one another I thought perhaps I was hallucinating, did I just hear what I thought I heard? 

"Jimmy, I want you to take care of the new kid at Gymboree." 

Jimmy looked nervously at his little friend and said,

"Anything for you Donny... anything, you just say the word." 

Donny thinking hard or filling his pants said,

"I want you to make him an offer he can't refuse."

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Comments: 33

Marianne M. Apr 19, 2008, 2:16pm EDT
Bravo! This is hilarious, Kristina!!!! And I love your title ...
Curt L. Apr 19, 2008, 3:24pm EDT
Oh! This is delightful, Kristina! Thank you!
Kristina B. Apr 19, 2008, 4:20pm EDT
Thanks guys, I really like this one!
Miz Lynn aka/BooBoo Apr 20, 2008, 1:17am EDT
HA! HA! Cute and funny!
Wanda H. Apr 20, 2008, 3:47am EDT
excellent drabble, very spooky isn't it, the idea of babies that can talk. But funny!
Marge H. Apr 20, 2008, 5:57pm EDT
Hahaha! Very cute! Great job Kristina!
Holli G. Apr 21, 2008, 9:03pm EDT
LOL! That is really cute Kristina!
Alison Pearce Apr 21, 2008, 11:16pm EDT
Fabulous drabble!
Pat M. Apr 22, 2008, 5:52am EDT
They start 'em young, don't they Kristina?
Well done... and nobody has, erm, persuaded me to say that...
Kay M. Apr 22, 2008, 2:15pm EDT
Funny! Great job.
Kate Keeley Apr 22, 2008, 11:33pm EDT
What a fun story. I enjoyed the humor. Fabulous job of giving us a peek into their future.
Charli Mills Apr 23, 2008, 7:54am EDT
Brilliant! My favorite line is, "Donny thinking hard or filling his pants." Great drabble!
lynn a. Apr 24, 2008, 10:45am EDT
Funny drabble you've written here. I can just see it.
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Apr 24, 2008, 10:46am EDT
Really intelligentle two babbling oh not Seriously funny !!!
Donald M. Apr 24, 2008, 12:46pm EDT
That was funny, you know when they get red in the face, they are mad or something stinky is about to happen.
Sheila Deeth Apr 24, 2008, 1:10pm EDT
This was fun. Loved Donny's thinking hard or...
Jan S. Apr 24, 2008, 3:18pm EDT
What a hoot! Mafia babies.
Susan B. Apr 24, 2008, 3:32pm EDT
too funny! They start early don't they :)
Becky Powell Apr 24, 2008, 5:02pm EDT
Very funny! I love the "thinking hard" line. Great job.
Jane O. Apr 24, 2008, 5:14pm EDT
Naming him Donny... very clever!
penni d. Apr 24, 2008, 5:34pm EDT
My, he started young,lol...
Jim Ross Apr 24, 2008, 9:42pm EDT
Cute, Krystal. Loved the dialogue.
Jonathan S. Apr 24, 2008, 9:46pm EDT
Excellent work.
Ann R. Apr 25, 2008, 10:32pm EDT
This was very funny. Hate to think what their terrible two's will be like.
Stephanie B. Apr 26, 2008, 12:05am EDT
Cute! I wonder what he was offering. Hopefully, not the full diaper.
elizabeth e. Apr 26, 2008, 7:30am EDT
An offer he can't refuse! Funny!
Ruthe M. Apr 26, 2008, 7:44am EDT
LOL! I am still laughing! Kristina, this was hilarious!
Mary Beth Magee Apr 27, 2008, 1:34pm EDT
Oh my!
Mrslisae Photography E. Jun 3, 2008, 2:33pm EDT
hehe
denise e Aug 31, 2008, 12:12am EDT
wow

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