Speaking quietly
Celestial bodies
Share stories of the void
sometimes whispering softly
of ethereal exploits
Hushed invisible zephyr
Shapes rocks and worlds
Stellar wind without end
from new worlds to those so old
the Breath inspires twinkling stars
I gaze upon the stars
as if they hold a new world yet untraveled and unseen
I wish I could be up there too
Shining from so far away
Crystal drops on velvet cloak
Celestial beauty
Sparkling from above
Shows awesome wonders
frosted mansions softly glow
in the bright heavenly light
My spirit takes flight
Wings no longer clipped by darkness
soaring freely
The yawning ebon precipice
stretches forth to meet the dawn
Yet it's lost in misty mindsets
swims in my morass
turbid is the dawn
That sun so elusive
a light I must pursue
chase down a star?
I've walked the world's waist
what direction am I heading?
Which clippered ship sails so far
Into the dawn of brightness?
All things loose their shape
In this piercing light
Reflecting off of the waves
But I see the clarity
And feel the serenity
Crystal vision clears
Doubts, Fears, and all angst in us
Balance is restored.
Pitch black night and moonlit field
Dance, eternal tryst revealed
The night speaks to thee
Rolling with the melody
Lovers find the KEY
And in universal harmony
The cosmos aligns through infinity.
Sharing with the world
The truth and all its wisdom
yet to be unfurled
awaiting enlightenment
So joyfully expectant
Filling this dreamy head
with the sparkling breath
of internal twilight
Whispered stories flash throughout
Images of Love's wonder.


Comments: 23
This makes a statment for the synergy of poets.
Peace Blessings,
Wilka
Great minds not only think alike; but write very well together, too!
Everyone enjoyed this ~ even those who watched this come together. For a first time renga ~ I am proud of it. I hope everyone who participated and watched the renga come together are too.
Blessings Tracey and Everyone ~
Rene
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This content is beyond breathtaking! I can't tell you how many emotions raced through my heart as I read this. I ended up in tears! What exquisite beauty and clarity all of you have penned!
Tracey, this was a masterful idea; truly representative of the ingeniousness of your creative abilities and excellent group leadership, and it beautifully displays the remarkably poignant talents of each of the above writers. What an outstanding collaboration of work!! I'm very impressed.
I wish I could take credit for the idea, but a few months ago we talked about collaboration of poets after Corrina Parr asked the question and I was so impressed with the Tan Renga that she had done, that I did a some research and that's how the idea of the Collaborative Renga came up. We started small with two person teams with the idea that we would try this at some point.
Tracey, this was a wonderful idea!!!
Great poets, one and all!
Let's do this again!
Thank you greatly Tracey!!!
Thank you everybody.