by Sandra T.

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June 22, 2007

Ride Haiku

October 29, 2007 02:22 PM EDT (Updated: October 31, 2007 01:02 PM EDT)

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The car makes its' way

up the steep colossal hill.

Screams errupt going down.

Tags: haiku, ride, poem, poetry

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Comments: 34

Vivian P. Oct 29, 2007, 2:24pm EDT

very nice

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Julia *loves my baby girl chloe* M. Oct 29, 2007, 2:25pm EDT

very good!! you always write great haikus!!!

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Marge H. Oct 29, 2007, 2:38pm EDT

I remember roads like that!

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Kay M. Oct 29, 2007, 2:41pm EDT

Yikes! No brakes! Cute haiku.

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Stacie N. Oct 29, 2007, 2:56pm EDT

I'm so not a fan of roller coasters, which is the image this haiku brings up for me!

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Elaine A. Oct 29, 2007, 3:03pm EDT

very good

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Terri H. Oct 29, 2007, 3:16pm EDT

cute!

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Sammie B. Oct 29, 2007, 3:20pm EDT

Hehe...sounds like our car rides. xD Nice haiku.

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Matthew B. Oct 29, 2007, 3:22pm EDT

Haiku me some more!

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Elaine B. Oct 29, 2007, 3:39pm EDT

So cute!

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Heather W. Oct 29, 2007, 4:25pm EDT

Nice haiku.

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Denise B. Oct 29, 2007, 4:57pm EDT

Good one

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Human, Katherine, seeker of intergalactic life, inhabitant of Earth Oct 29, 2007, 6:16pm EDT

Ohhhhh noooooooo......great haiku

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Susan E. Oct 29, 2007, 6:22pm EDT

it's a rollercoaster ride of Haiku! great.

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Sandra T. Oct 29, 2007, 7:32pm EDT

Thanks for all the great comments 8)

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Christine P. Oct 29, 2007, 7:54pm EDT

This is a really fun haiku! I can remember those rodes as a kid and thinking it was like a roller coaster ride.

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donna h. Oct 29, 2007, 8:35pm EDT

nice

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j - Frugal Mom - r. Oct 29, 2007, 8:59pm EDT

Very nice

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Charlotte Babb Maven-Fairy Godmother Oct 29, 2007, 9:08pm EDT

must live in SF! Great poem

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queen.susan . Oct 29, 2007, 11:05pm EDT

Very well written.

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Melanie B. Oct 29, 2007, 11:10pm EDT

DB TEN =)

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Phyllis R. Oct 29, 2007, 11:15pm EDT

This is cute!

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Connie C. Oct 29, 2007, 11:32pm EDT

:) cute

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Elizabeth Madrigal Oct 30, 2007, 3:10am EDT

Clever.:)

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Otelia S. Oct 30, 2007, 2:24pm EDT

What to do? What to do?.
Thanks for sharing.

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Anne M. Oct 31, 2007, 8:52am EDT

I was on the Roller Coaster with you. ; )

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Glenn T. Oct 31, 2007, 11:18am EDT

Wild ride.

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Leah A. Oct 31, 2007, 5:19pm EDT

nice haiku

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Kathy D. Nov 2, 2007, 2:34pm EDT

very cool

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robert g. Nov 2, 2007, 11:51pm EDT

Nice little haiku, but then, aren't all haiku's little? I think it's the size of the hill and the sound of the screams that make this one a bit larger than most.

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