by Jared G.
Member since:
November 16, 2005

Take a peek at this haiku, you!

July 27, 2007 07:38 PM EDT
views: 40 | comments: 20
        over the peak
billowy clouds drop off to
               steal a peek
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Comments: 20

Janet Somewhere Up On The Mount Jul 27, 2007, 7:41pm EDT
I like it.
DB 10
t b. Jul 27, 2007, 7:42pm EDT
Interesting.
*LORA* M. Jul 27, 2007, 7:44pm EDT
10
Otelia S. Jul 27, 2007, 7:59pm EDT
Interesting play on words
10
Jared G. Jul 27, 2007, 8:19pm EDT
Thanks much ladies!
Suzi :Two sides to every story Jul 27, 2007, 8:36pm EDT
I like it. 10
Cheryl W. Jul 27, 2007, 11:18pm EDT
Very nice, Jared..
Carol Lloyd Jul 27, 2007, 11:43pm EDT
GOOD ONE
El Toro Bravo de Amor Jul 27, 2007, 11:48pm EDT
end rhymed haiku??? Jared, just wait till I get my hands on you! arrrgh! that rhymed too! ;)
Sheila Deeth Jul 28, 2007, 12:02am EDT
Neat peek.
Jared G. Jul 28, 2007, 1:38am EDT
You are right Bret - that should NEVER have happened.
I revise:

over the peaks
billowy clouds drop off to steal
a peek below

Ah.........better! Nite all.
Jeana Hamilton Jul 28, 2007, 2:09am EDT
Hmmm i like it, come read mine (its my first) under the article title "this is short read it"
andrew c. Jul 28, 2007, 4:26am EDT
cool
Beth G. Jul 28, 2007, 12:16pm EDT
I like clouds, pretty cool description.
donna h. Jul 28, 2007, 8:46pm EDT
nice
Anne B. Grote Jul 29, 2007, 7:55pm EDT
It's interesting and I bet over the peek is too! Great!
Kelly M. Jul 29, 2007, 11:20pm EDT
nicely done
Jared G. Jul 30, 2007, 11:08am EDT
Hoo-hah! thanks to all...
Barbara B. Jul 30, 2007, 5:23pm EDT
WooHoo Jared! I loved it! And I
don't know what haiku is!!
Karolyn Q. Aug 27, 2007, 7:45am EDT
Very nice.

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