by Jennifer N.
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September 8, 2006

Inspiration - 30 Word Snippet.

May 02, 2008 05:04 PM EDT (Updated: May 03, 2008 07:02 AM EDT)
views: 100 | comments: 26
This was done a few days ago along with four others. I'm just now getting the chance to post it. As always ALL feedback is welcomed.

These are done in fun by me, but make no mistake, they are copyrighted. I know most here know that... but those finding me via other methods may not. *wink*

On a breeze it comes to me
So light, so airy, one could barely see
I grasp firmly, yet tenderly; afraid to let go
This little seed I must sow

Copyright © Jennifer N April 24, 2008.

Free Poser tube laid over my original photo of Little Norway. Image edited and created by me.
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Comments: 26

Mary M. May 2, 2008, 7:03pm EDT
Very nicely done!
Jennifer N. May 2, 2008, 7:27pm EDT
I have a feeling that 'yet tenderly' part throws off the whole snippet. The rhyme works better without it, but I like that part just the same, LOL
Jennifer N. May 2, 2008, 7:27pm EDT
Thank you Mary.
Amanda "middle of nowhere" C. May 2, 2008, 8:28pm EDT
This is very good. I don't think "yet tenderly" throws it off at all. I think you should leave it in.
Linda K. May 2, 2008, 9:30pm EDT
Very nice!
Amy H. May 2, 2008, 10:16pm EDT
Nice



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Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. May 2, 2008, 10:19pm EDT
Thanks for sharing.
Alice N. May 2, 2008, 11:23pm EDT
I like both a lot.
KC Klein May 3, 2008, 2:07am EDT
fun, indeed
Digital Diva S. May 3, 2008, 7:17am EDT
Thanks for posting this to BEST ORIGINAL PHOTOS, ART AND WRITING FOR 2008.
donna h. May 3, 2008, 10:38am EDT
very good
cool poem and pic!
Haim Kadman May 3, 2008, 12:15pm EDT
I loved it Jennifer and the image is so beautifully done!
Rose H. May 3, 2008, 11:06pm EDT
Nicely done - I like both.
Sammie B. May 4, 2008, 9:31am EDT
Beautiful snippet. It's quite accurate and you describe the feeling very well with your limited words. I like the picture, too. Fits very nicely.
Very nice.
donna h. May 8, 2008, 5:41am EDT
very good
necee t. Jun 6, 2008, 10:21pm EDT
wow, this is great... love the pic... cool...
René Allen Feb 28, 2009, 3:31pm EST
This is a perfect AIRY~Style Snippet Jennifer!

This is WELL DONE, and is also FEATURED in Snippets! ~ "Where WE write in "30" words or less." and in Artistic Minds®

Glad I finally saw this!

Your Friend,
Rene
Georgiana S. Feb 28, 2009, 7:40pm EST
sounds like Mother Earth speaking!
elizabeth e. Mar 1, 2009, 6:57pm EST
Gorgeous image to go with the snippert. Does remind me of Mother Earth.
Very well done
Jennifer Lee Mar 6, 2009, 9:32pm EST
Beautiful Snippet. Is it about your muse?
Jennifer N. Mar 8, 2009, 9:42pm EDT
Thanks Amanda & Linda.

This is very good. I don't think "yet tenderly" throws it off at all. I think you should leave it in.
Amanda "middle of nowhere" C., May 2, 2008, 8:28pm EDT

Thank you Amy, Beth and Alice.

Thanks Karl

Kacie thanks for the suggestions. I'm going to work them into the edit.

Thanks digital, Donna and Mandi.

Thank you so much Haim.

Thanks Rose, Sammie, Trista, Donna, Necee.

Thanks Renee! Always better late than never. I'm late seeing a lot, too.

In a way, Georgiana.

Thank you Elizabeth & Renee.

Indeed it is, Jennifer. Though it can take on multiple meanings.
René Allen Mar 11, 2009, 12:24am EDT
HUGS Jen ~ I love how you've taken your Poser skills and really gone to work artistically. Your Groups are SERIOUSLY looking GOOD too by the way.

Your Friend til the end ~
Rene

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