Back turned to the moon
The shadows hid his hollow hatred
Sweaty eyes tired of the taunt
From a muscular mass of arrogance
A wooden weapon poked him from behind
Words prodded his dirty destitution
The sharp stick tore his papery skin
Wielded by the toothless knight
He grasped a honed knife
Defending his last thread of dignity
Thrust rusted steel into a fading heart
Slay the jabbing threat again and again
Seth died last night;
For the last time
A guy I know was murdered last night in the middle of the bluffs ( I now live with my parents in Pacific Palisades ). He used to be a charismatic, appealing man until he became addicted to steroids and crack. He changed so drastically; he transformed into a violent, manipulative thief who I avoided at all costs.
Yes, they were a menace and transient addicts.
Remember, they were both someone’s child.
Who else will speak for them now?


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I'm aware of how harmful these substances are.
Your dramatic poem did not understate the problem. Yo don't know how much I hate what I've accidentally seen.
Very realistically and well written.
Hugs
This was expected. Better him than an innocent soul he took advantage of.
I just miss the man he could have been ( and was )
This poem is a raw fact of life. It leaves the reader with a very bruised heart.
That's one thing I always think of, how will the parents cope.
Thank you for writing it, your talent in doing so.
In an odd twist of fate, my second brother is a recovering alcoholic who is dying from cirhosis of the liver. He was never the bum the first brother was - sometimes life doesn't make sense.