Take a journey to the center of your mind a deep and dark twisting and turning way through space and time to a diverse origin of dimension. There a key was forged from gold that unlocks a gate to sunlight and warmth. I looked back on life and saw the end of days and behold all the quickened were revealed. When the heart stopped blood flowed into the river Styx and all and all was not and never to be again. I heard voice call out believe in thy self and wonders shall be revealed, you shall live forever. Then another voice said come and see, better to rein in Hell than to serve in Heaven. Choose live and live forever, choose death and escape to a place blue from cold.
Take this journey to the center of your mind and levels of light unwind, Love, Peace and Faith reveal a path of light. Like through a pane of glass the soul unwound the good should outweigh the bad as the journey begins. But then in a moments glance a Snake appeared and on a whim injected the sins of Adam holding all Worldly things as this journey ends, The River.
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Fine post. I'd rather see it broken into lines. Not so it "becomes poetry" (it's already fully poetic) but because you can guide the reader's pace of reading, and recognition of ideas, better in that form.
However, it's not about the 19th century (Victorian) Era, so I'll have to decline it for Victoriana. I'd love to see it at How We Write, though.
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