Deeper are the eyes i always see

Like a rainbow that you never reach

Far is the bottom

And to surface I dont either seek

My sleep I have lost in them

Rested more watching you in my arms sleep

Feelings I am bound to

Moments every just around you

Find very hard to express all whats in me

Scared sometimes you might it unreal find

To love so much endlessly

Passion so intense I have never known

Being by you every moment

Desires rising higher than the highest peak

Cold it is when you get there

Short a life when you know it is

Yet want to take it all

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Noble Chinwendu Nov 2, 2009, 1:37pm EST

Beautifully rhythmic. lovely poetry

Satya Jell Nov 3, 2009, 1:42pm EST

thanks Noble glad you liked it

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vivi emerson Nov 2, 2009, 5:30pm EST

very interesting! Reminiscent of the first loves in our lives. Strong emotions, overwhelming even in the face of consequences and common sense. Well done, Satya.

Satya Jell Nov 3, 2009, 1:43pm EST

Yes feelings are not pressured by consequences and common sense. After all common sense in most uncommon to find! Thanks for your kind words.

vivi emerson Nov 3, 2009, 4:51pm EST

Very true!

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