Your heartbeat echos on my skin.
Such a tender wanting;
What more is there than this...
the whisper, the sigh
of passion's sweet persuasion...
the ecstasy
of love's sweet reply.
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Whispering softness pervades, permeats in my world ; through your exquisite words.
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This is very lovely
very nice
Very deep
REally beautiful Cheryl!! But your poems, etc always are!!!!
nice
good
Oh Cheryl... this is incredible. I love how the rhythm echoes the sentiment behind the words, and the strength -and- delicacy of what you're expressing. Beautiful.
That is very good. Thanks.
Very beautiful as always.
Absolutely lovely! :-)
Blessings and best wishes - S.
Very nice!!
This piece tells so much. What more is there than this ? Love means so much . For something that is free in giving. What more could you ask? Beautiful.
very beautiful
Soft, sweet passion is hard to come by, and you have done it well!
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lovely ! as always! :) hope you are doing well.
thanks for sharing
Short and sweet! :)
Well done, Cheryl!
Rest easy
Very well Done!
"Your heartbeat echos on my skin"
Was there ever a more perfect line? Exquisite work.
Ah - the ectasy of love's sweet reply:) I loved every word of this, Cheryl, I don't think it is possible to improve upon this work - it is perfection.
Love it, Cheryl! Thank you for posting to our group.
wonderful
That was really nice. Thank you for sharing it. I really enjoyed it.
gentle
Powerful stuff there.
It never ceases to amaze me that you can say so much with such few words! This is a wonderful poem my friend!
I'm rather passionate about how much I love this poem!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Amen, Cheryl. Such a strikingly writ position of love.
Good stuff.
Thank you everyone...for your kind comments..
Thanks
Awesome, touching write!
Sweet and sensual!
I love your work
Thanks! Sorry for the generic comment but I'm wading through over 500 e-mails.