by Cheryl W.
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December 10, 2005

Night (haiku)

May 17, 2009 11:15 PM EDT
views: 103 | comments: 31

dreams whisper softly

angels dance on moonbeam's glow

gentle is the night

 

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Comments: 31

Visionaerie B. May 17, 2009, 11:22pm EDT
That's positively mesmerizing! Thanks for posting this.
Rose H. May 17, 2009, 11:42pm EDT
Ah I like the part about gentle is the night:) Beautiful, Cheryl - a wonderful thought to linger as I lay my head to rest:)
Adrian Eve Revenaugh May 17, 2009, 11:43pm EDT
A fine little bedtime chant. Nice!
Jennifer Lee May 17, 2009, 11:46pm EDT
Lovely, Cheryl! Thank you for posting to our group. I have one that I'm about to post about the moon, too. Same wave length, but mine has a darker tone.
Georgiana S. May 18, 2009, 12:10am EDT
my special time!
Jason Hillenburg May 18, 2009, 12:16am EDT
It's a quiet, still haiku. It makes me think of pristine, starry nights unbroken by sound.
Larry H. May 18, 2009, 12:21am EDT
THANKS FOR SHARING....
Jo N. May 18, 2009, 12:40am EDT
Very nice!
Kathryn E. May 18, 2009, 1:12am EDT
Soft and gentle

Featured in the Triple Name Club.
Kimber F. May 18, 2009, 1:28am EDT
How wonderful and beautiful. That is sometimes the hardest form of poetry to write and you did it so well. The imagery that it drew up in me was touching. Thanks for sharing and peace.
Nora Davenport May 18, 2009, 1:43am EDT
Very beautiful, Cheryl!
Svetlana Goryacheva May 18, 2009, 4:48am EDT
Fantastic! :-)

Blessings and best wishes - S.
JustMe ~I'm happy to be~ May 18, 2009, 5:26am EDT
Very sweet.
Deb J. May 18, 2009, 7:03am EDT
Oh Wow Cheryl!!! That is absolutely lovely!!! Sounds like such a wonderful spot to be!!! Very expressive!!!

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peggy g. May 18, 2009, 9:32am EDT
very nice ,
Jennifer W. May 18, 2009, 10:24am EDT
Great one. Thanks for sharing.
Janie E. May 18, 2009, 10:37am EDT
Oh, so sweet!!!
delicate and lovely~
Kushal Poddar May 18, 2009, 11:44am EDT
Wonderful.


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Corinna Parr May 18, 2009, 11:50am EDT
This is lovely, Cheryl. As gentle and delicate in language as the reality of what you're describing.
Charity M. May 18, 2009, 3:53pm EDT
((( A winner of hearts...angels smile )))
Sharon P. May 18, 2009, 4:09pm EDT
Very nice.
Chas Andrews May 18, 2009, 5:11pm EDT
thanks
Howard b. May 18, 2009, 7:48pm EDT
very short and very pretty. Thank you Cheryl for sharing.
Angela A. May 19, 2009, 12:44am EDT
Haikus are so awesome!

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Teresa T. May 19, 2009, 1:49am EDT
Well done!
Sheila Deeth May 19, 2009, 10:01pm EDT
Gentle indeed, and lovely.
Lisa Frost May 21, 2009, 8:58am EDT

Lovely!
Vern R. May 22, 2009, 2:00am EDT

Ahh...and a lovely "good night" to you.
Peter Edgerton May 28, 2009, 3:50pm EDT

Stunningly visual and evocative.
Matthew A. Aug 3, 2009, 6:11pm EDT
Short and sweet, huh? I agree with Peter on this one. It is short but the visual is very vast!

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