by Nation !!!!
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September 11, 2007

A life lived without you...

April 03, 2009 08:49 PM EDT
views: 131 | comments: 39

Looking to the future that lays ahead,

Happy images fill my eager mind,

Gaining courage for any couragous fight,

Cause a life lived without you could never be right.

 

The sun shines on all that is good just for me,

Beautiful children to bless my everyday,

Needing you adds one more thing to love,

Cause a life lived without you could never be right.

 

Falling victim to the love that draws me nearer,

Making choices to enhance this feeling that fills me,

Always ending at the same answer as before,

Cause a life lived without you could never be right.

 

Warm inside from the first day of hearing your voice,

All I find is myself always thinking of you,

Longing for the chance to win you over this night,

Cause a life lived without you could never be right.

 

Nation

 

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Comments: 39

chelsie t. Apr 3, 2009, 8:50pm EDT
Great job!
Mrslisae Photography E. Apr 3, 2009, 8:53pm EDT
I give it a 10! Wonderful.
Lisa Frost Apr 3, 2009, 8:55pm EDT
It is good!
Marianne R. Apr 3, 2009, 8:56pm EDT
Very good
Larry H. Apr 3, 2009, 8:57pm EDT
great job
Nora Davenport Apr 3, 2009, 9:00pm EDT
Wow, what a beautiful, powerful poem of love!!!!! Very well written!!!
Nancy L. Apr 3, 2009, 9:01pm EDT
This sounds lyrical- maybe a song?
tammie p. Apr 3, 2009, 9:07pm EDT
this was beautiful nation
Lona Herling Apr 3, 2009, 9:08pm EDT
Very beautiful.
Beth G. Apr 3, 2009, 9:09pm EDT
This was so lovely Nation!
t w. Apr 3, 2009, 9:10pm EDT
great job!
GayLynn P. Apr 3, 2009, 9:13pm EDT
Beautiful sentiment. I thought it sounded like a song also.
Stacey Voss Apr 3, 2009, 9:13pm EDT
That was absolutely wonderful!
Deloris Wright Apr 3, 2009, 9:27pm EDT
That is so beautiful. That is what I have been feeling. With Col George being gone for so long.[ He is in Texas]. and with out him here my life could never be right.
Spencer T. Apr 3, 2009, 9:32pm EDT
Good and powerfully writ. Enjoyed.
Georgiana S. Apr 3, 2009, 9:44pm EDT
great, scary to be that reliant on another !
Renee S. Apr 3, 2009, 10:00pm EDT
Nice writing.
fancy c. Apr 3, 2009, 10:15pm EDT
awesome writing
Leora E. Apr 3, 2009, 10:49pm EDT
Nation you have such a tender heart. Your poem is so sweet & loving
Jackie T. Apr 4, 2009, 12:23am EDT
nicely done :)
Kimberly Ripley Apr 4, 2009, 1:57am EDT
Refreshingly honest.....beautiful.
Syed The Shah Apr 4, 2009, 11:00am EDT
Very nice work indeed, your words are bright and touching...
phil w. Apr 4, 2009, 12:21pm EDT
Nice work.
Otelia S. Apr 4, 2009, 1:19pm EDT
Excellence!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lisa Madona U. Apr 4, 2009, 3:02pm EDT
so beautiful
Angela A. Apr 4, 2009, 3:08pm EDT
You have a lovely way with words.
Thanks for the awesome poem!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Michelle W. Apr 4, 2009, 5:32pm EDT
Lovely poem!
Meagan M. Apr 7, 2009, 12:31pm EDT
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Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Apr 7, 2009, 12:51pm EDT
Stopping by to say
Charity M. Apr 7, 2009, 9:41pm EDT
((( lOVE SAID SO BEAUTIFULLY )))
Penny M. Apr 12, 2009, 12:11pm EDT
very good
Jamie Kiser Apr 13, 2009, 3:38pm EDT
I love you too baby more than you could ever know beautiful poem
Martha R. Apr 22, 2009, 7:29am EDT
Very good ... ok so I now have to go through all your postings and check them out the first two i've read were really good...
Teresa H. Apr 23, 2009, 9:26am EDT
Wonderful.
Mary H. Apr 23, 2009, 8:17pm EDT
beautiful sentiment to those you love
Carol B Apr 24, 2009, 10:23am EDT
Nation that is beautiful and so heartfelt!
Shelbia C. Apr 27, 2009, 11:36pm EDT
wonderful
Sheila Deeth Apr 28, 2009, 10:02pm EDT
Beautiful poem. Lovely words, and lovely rhythm to it.
Joann Nicole May 7, 2009, 6:04am EDT
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Have a great day!

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