by Nation !!!!
Member since:
September 11, 2007

Your touch...

February 03, 2009 01:13 AM EST (Updated: March 16, 2009 09:37 PM EDT)
views: 94 | comments: 31

Your touch is only described by the chill,

The warmth that just one fingertip brings,

Running down my chest, driving me crazy,

Longing for more with each passing stroke.

 

Your touch is confirmed by the smile on my face,

The look in my eye as you glare at me with need, 

Romance growing with each and every closing,

Opening again to meet the fire building in mine.

 

Your touch so soft as my voice quivers for you,

As the words I love you roll from my tounge,

Your breath hardens every inch I pull you closer,

Control can last only so long, I need your touch.

 

Nation !!!!

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Comments: 31

karen h. Feb 3, 2009, 1:15am EST
Very well written
alicia h. Feb 3, 2009, 1:25am EST
thats very nice!
Teresa T. Feb 3, 2009, 1:35am EST
Likey... Likey...
Lynn R. Feb 3, 2009, 1:59am EST
HOT!! Very hot! Love it.
Linda T. Feb 3, 2009, 2:04am EST
I love the passion that consumes your poetry
Nurse Nancy S. Feb 3, 2009, 2:41am EST
So passionate and romantic!
Sue T. Feb 3, 2009, 2:42am EST
A very lovely and passionate write, Nation ~ well done.
Kris P. Feb 3, 2009, 4:50am EST
Very passionate!
Cindy B. Feb 3, 2009, 5:35am EST
Nice poem! =)
Jamie Kiser Feb 3, 2009, 6:48am EST
very nice i love it
Joann Nicole Feb 3, 2009, 7:10am EST
wow so very.......hmm my computer is on fire........hot!!! lol very good job on this one!!!!
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Feb 3, 2009, 7:19am EST
Thanks for Sharing on Helping Out One Another
Laurie R. Feb 3, 2009, 7:50am EST
Very nice Nation. Thanks for sharing that with us.
Katrena M. Feb 3, 2009, 8:38am EST
awesome
Jennifer Lee Feb 3, 2009, 10:05am EST
Good poem, I know of the feelings you describe all too well.

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DIANE D. Feb 3, 2009, 11:07am EST
This is wonderful~
Tonya Downen Feb 3, 2009, 11:12am EST
Just wonderful....So sweet...
Lisa Frost Feb 3, 2009, 11:37am EST
excellent writing!
Steph-in-NE ..... Feb 3, 2009, 12:28pm EST
very well put thanks for sharing
Nora Davenport Feb 3, 2009, 12:30pm EST
Beautiful poem.....so passionate.....I really love it and always enjoy your poems.....you're very talented!
tammie p. Feb 3, 2009, 1:19pm EST
beautiful
Larry H. Feb 3, 2009, 5:25pm EST
nicely written thanks for sharing
Ginger C. Feb 4, 2009, 1:08pm EST
Excellent!
rainne chandler Feb 4, 2009, 1:53pm EST
WOW THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL
Angela A. Feb 4, 2009, 4:32pm EST
Sorry for the short message. But, my group has gotten very heavy in posts. So, all I have time to say is, thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Courtney C. Feb 4, 2009, 7:58pm EST
Wow
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Feb 5, 2009, 7:12pm EST
you sure do have a way with words
rainne chandler Mar 9, 2009, 1:04pm EDT
just me making sure i havent missed any more of your posts
Janie E. Mar 17, 2009, 12:43am EDT
Filled with passion!!!
Otelia S. Mar 17, 2009, 6:27pm EDT
Well Well Now!
That's a "10"
Melissa R May 5, 2009, 10:05pm EDT
thanks for sharing-
- stopping by from Points Nation!!

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