by Cheryl W.
Member since:
December 10, 2005

Soaring

July 30, 2008 10:41 PM EDT
views: 55 | comments: 20

Like a whisper

in the still of night,

you come to me

and my soul takes flight,

soaring to heights

I've never known.

 

Please don't let me fall.

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Comments: 20

Bob B. Jul 30, 2008, 10:49pm EDT
I like this Cheryl.
Priscilla P. Jul 30, 2008, 10:51pm EDT
I amthinking the soaring sounds good but use your OWN wings and don't depend on anyone else's.
Vivian P. Jul 30, 2008, 11:04pm EDT
beautiful
Larry H. Jul 30, 2008, 11:19pm EDT
very good thanks for sharing..
Alison H. Jul 30, 2008, 11:23pm EDT
Lovely!

(Priscilla has a point)
Cheryl W. Jul 30, 2008, 11:29pm EDT
Priscilla...yes, I've learned this to be true. Still, that feeling of being swept away is quite a feeling....and can render some of us a bit senseless at times...:)
MYKE D. Jul 30, 2008, 11:50pm EDT
This is lovely . And I have been senseless at times. awesome feeling.

Myke
Lisa Frost Jul 31, 2008, 12:26am EDT
i know that senseless feeling all too well. Great job, I really like your work.
Cristina S. Jul 31, 2008, 1:44am EDT
love your images: whisper, soaring...
Kushal Poddar Jul 31, 2008, 1:52am EDT
just beautiful. you are brilliant here.
Lawrence U. Jul 31, 2008, 2:26am EDT
Ever so sweet - I love the imagery! :)
Nice. I liked the last line, especially. ;o)
Patricia F. Jul 31, 2008, 9:35am EDT
Love the softness of this...
Richard B. Jul 31, 2008, 10:57am EDT
very nice Cheryl
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Jul 31, 2008, 2:53pm EDT
sweet.
Chelsea R. Jul 31, 2008, 3:30pm EDT
great job! i love the title, soaring!
Terry Collett Jul 31, 2008, 3:36pm EDT
Good & expressive.
Tiffany G. Jul 31, 2008, 10:50pm EDT
very ncie!
Janie E. Aug 1, 2008, 4:27am EDT
I can relate to this!!! Oh, Yeah!!!!!

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