by David C.

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January 15, 2006

Early Bird

September 14, 2007 05:54 AM EDT

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waking before ducks

sun still slumbers in the east

I wait for first light

Tags: morning, haiku, sunrise, poem, poetry, good morning

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Comments: 10

~~ Sarina ~~ Sep 14, 2007, 7:10am EDT

Great Haiku.
Even though I could sleep in this morning, I am fully awake, sipping coffee, and reading your Haiku. : )

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lynn a. Sep 14, 2007, 8:56am EDT

Yes, Great Haiku. Made early morning feel wonderful.

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Angela P. Sep 14, 2007, 9:18am EDT

Cool.

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Sara :-) Sep 14, 2007, 11:54am EDT

Well done.

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Tina Coruth Sep 14, 2007, 9:49pm EDT

Lovely haiku!!! Thank you.

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Osofo Addo Sep 15, 2007, 3:02pm EDT

Moving and to the point..Thank you for sharing.

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Bundy P Sep 16, 2007, 7:20pm EDT

Very nice

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Paul J. Sep 17, 2007, 6:19pm EDT

Very uplifting haiku, David. That is the way I like to start my day.

Thank you.

pj

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jessie voigts Sep 21, 2007, 10:45am EDT

lovely haiku - i felt it!

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Margaret G. Oct 2, 2007, 8:59pm EDT

Very nice.

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