by Cheryl W.
Member since:
December 10, 2005

Sweet Surrender

March 24, 2007 10:27 AM EDT
views: 43 | comments: 13

Sweet surrender,

moth to flame,

passion's promise

when you call my name;

 

Sweet surrender,

desire's gentle kiss,

hands upon me;

What mounting bliss!

 

Sweet surrender

I shiver in fear,

I flow with excitement

Just knowing you are near;

 

Oh, how I want you!

My spirit longs to soar;

Once is never enough with you;

You leave me longing for more.

 

 

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Comments: 13

Landen Michaels Mar 24, 2007, 10:32am EDT
Proof positive: Sometimes, surrender is a very good option.
Randy- Being true to myself Mar 24, 2007, 10:33am EDT
My spirit longs to soar;

Great line Cheryl, thanks for this wonderful poem...
David B. Mar 24, 2007, 10:38am EDT
Beautiful, Cheryl
LEЯA © Politcally Incorrect M. Mar 24, 2007, 11:20am EDT
I absolutely love it!
vickey w Mar 24, 2007, 11:40am EDT
good one
Paula C. Mar 24, 2007, 7:02pm EDT
another good one Cheryl.. Thanks for sharing your talent with us
Howard b. Mar 25, 2007, 12:16am EDT
Beautiful Cheryl. What a special place to be. enjoy your sweet surrender. Thanks for sharing. Again .Beautiful.
Carol Roach Mar 25, 2007, 12:50am EDT
another good one
Spencer T. Mar 25, 2007, 5:52am EDT
Lovely loving words
I strive like you to write
My fingers and my mind
attempt the same at night.

Good stuff

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