by Cheryl W.
Member since:
December 10, 2005

Bright Sky (haiku)

March 16, 2007 08:01 PM EDT
views: 19 | rating: 9.9/10 (7 votes) | comments: 13

sun fades into night

stars illuminate the sky

your love is shining

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Comments: 13

John Doyle Mar 16, 2007, 8:04pm EDT
Cheryyl, whether us use long forms or short you never miss the mark
Sonali ~ Mar 16, 2007, 8:29pm EDT
Loved this!!!!
what a beautiful image that etched in my mind.
You have a way with words Cheryl.
Deb J. Mar 16, 2007, 9:24pm EDT
Yes! This article is a precious gem in the Gather treasure chest! You have my 10! Really it's good!
John F Walter Mar 16, 2007, 11:30pm EDT
Lovely, Cheryl.
Sue * Mar 17, 2007, 12:11am EDT
Perfectly done. 10
Larry H. Mar 17, 2007, 9:01am EDT
thanks for sharing.
ravi bedi Mar 17, 2007, 12:36pm EDT
Sun never fades
It goes to sleep
To rise again
To brighten your day

Stars illuminate the sky
Only when Sun goes to sleep
But your love shines
Even in the darkest of nights
Or the brightest of lights
Sun will set
Stars will vanish
But not your love
It will shine
As long as I live.
amanda wallin Mar 17, 2007, 2:07pm EDT
Your poems are so romantic and succinct. I loved it!
Cortney R. Mar 17, 2007, 4:45pm EDT
really heartfelt words.
Diana Raabe Mar 19, 2007, 4:17pm EDT
Now that's a nice comparison - good job with haiku!
Patricia W. Mar 27, 2007, 2:00am EDT
Very nice.

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