by Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen
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August 5, 2006

Pool Song (Haiku)

February 24, 2007 02:09 PM EST (Updated: February 28, 2007 04:29 PM EST)
views: 47 | comments: 19

Pool Song 

Bright sun and strong breezes,

And sounds of water splashing

Draw me to the pool
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Comments: 19

Cheryl W. Feb 24, 2007, 2:17pm EST
Good one, Audrey..
William M. Feb 24, 2007, 2:25pm EST
Great, Audrey.
Michele Scercy Feb 24, 2007, 2:38pm EST
I like this one.
Carol Lloyd Feb 24, 2007, 2:46pm EST
Good one, Audrey
Larry H. Feb 24, 2007, 3:00pm EST
didn't get very warm even with the sun shinging..
Anne Marie A. Feb 24, 2007, 3:43pm EST
smliing :0) after reading you haiku and I am ready for warmer weather.
Shaunee C. Feb 24, 2007, 3:58pm EST
That's cool. I wish I had a pool
Howard b. Feb 24, 2007, 4:06pm EST
I love pools. sounds like fun.
donna h. Feb 24, 2007, 4:12pm EST
I wish....we expecting snow tonite!
Sherry Asbury Feb 24, 2007, 4:49pm EST
Very nice one - love haiku
But today the only pool to see my frozen bones will have a bar of soap on the edge!
Connie C. Feb 24, 2007, 5:03pm EST
Nice
Sue * Feb 24, 2007, 5:05pm EST
I'm thinking that all of us that are suffering with the ice, snow, and crazy winter weather may have to disconnect from you until you get back home. I'm too depressed after reading the sun and fun writings!!! LOL
Elsie Duggan Feb 24, 2007, 5:22pm EST
Glad you're having nice weather Audrey. Cold up here.
Johnny Gregory Feb 24, 2007, 6:15pm EST
Cool!
Laura H. Feb 25, 2007, 12:40am EST
So true. I know that's what draws me to the pool :)
Debra H. Feb 25, 2007, 12:50am EST
Florida certainly has sparked your talents Audrey! 10
Anila J. Feb 25, 2007, 7:12am EST
I have a big pool and this is really very cool. Thanks Audrey!
Lawrence U. Feb 25, 2007, 4:38pm EST
Good work, Audrey.
Dawn M Feb 26, 2007, 7:32am EST
Sounds like a wonderful place to be. Can you bring some back with you?

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