by amy r.

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September 1, 2006

Sufferage

October 10, 2009 05:55 PM EDT

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Suffer my heart at our hand

My skin stings with tears

that streak my face

with mascara

and infinite filth

you are a sacred heathen sent straight from hell

to tempt my desires, my heart's on fire

you drip with desire. i sink deeper into the mire

your nothing but a f***ing liar....

beep i had to censor my self!

Tags: creative writing, writers, reading, books, literature, prose, writing, poets, poems, poetry, lyrics, composition

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Comments: 22 ( 1 removed by amy r. )

Sharon P. Oct 10, 2009, 6:28pm EDT

Wow. Good.

amy r. Oct 10, 2009, 6:39pm EDT

Thanks very much. I appreciate you reading it :)

Sharon P. Oct 11, 2009, 12:03pm EDT

Your welcome.

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Amanda "middle of nowhere" C. Oct 10, 2009, 8:13pm EDT

This is very good, Amy.

amy r. Oct 10, 2009, 11:19pm EDT

Thank you so much!

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Johnice R. Oct 10, 2009, 8:15pm EDT

I admire those who can say a great deal in a few lines.

Thanks!

amy r. Oct 10, 2009, 11:19pm EDT

Well, thank you!

Johnice R. Oct 11, 2009, 8:28am EDT

:)

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Debbie W. Oct 10, 2009, 10:23pm EDT

very good

amy r. Oct 10, 2009, 11:19pm EDT

Thanks!

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Annmarie B. Oct 10, 2009, 10:25pm EDT

Another one of your great writings!

amy r. Oct 10, 2009, 11:19pm EDT

I'm glad you thought so! Thanks for reading!

Annmarie B. Oct 11, 2009, 7:01am EDT

Keep writing and I will keep reading them.

amy r. Oct 11, 2009, 4:44pm EDT

Thanks, I got some more to put up later. I have a whole book filled with my brain poured out on paper :)

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Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 11, 2009, 3:28am EDT

Amy
Very good !!! :D :D

amy r. Oct 11, 2009, 3:20pm EDT

Thanks much!

Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 11, 2009, 3:30pm EDT

YW
:D

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Shirley ♡ ☮ M. Oct 11, 2009, 3:31am EDT

Nicely written.

amy r. Oct 11, 2009, 3:20pm EDT

Thank you!

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Stacey *Mamasaid* D. Oct 11, 2009, 11:17am EDT

Heavy hitting, powerfully honest - great write!

amy r. Oct 11, 2009, 3:20pm EDT

Thanks~!

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Terry Collett Oct 12, 2009, 2:43am EDT

Powerful poem, Amy. typo? ="your" ="you're"

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