by Jae F.
Member since:
June 12, 2007

Shhh!

August 28, 2007 10:02 PM EDT
views: 45 | comments: 13

Shhh!  Don’t talk; you’ll spoil the mood.

I’m just now comfortable.

Don’t make a move!!

 

Shhh!  Keep quiet; I’ll lose my concentration.

I’m just now relaxing.

Don’t make demands!!

 

Shhh!  Stop whining, you don’t have the power.

Dinner will be ready soon.

CSI Miami’s over in an hour.
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Comments: 13

Rick *Don Rico* J. Aug 28, 2007, 10:05pm EDT
Such a moving piece! ; ^)
Heidianna "Coriander" T. Aug 28, 2007, 10:06pm EDT
*giggles*
Donald M. Aug 28, 2007, 10:12pm EDT
Oh my goodness, that sounds like me before gather. I havent watched the tv since I joined. LOL
Jerri H. Aug 28, 2007, 10:13pm EDT
LOL!! Cute....I know how you feel ;)
Kylee S. Aug 28, 2007, 10:49pm EDT
This is absolutely adorable;I love the last line
Barbara L. Aug 28, 2007, 10:50pm EDT
i love it!!!!!
Jae F. Aug 28, 2007, 10:52pm EDT
Thanks every body!!!
Alison Pearce Aug 28, 2007, 11:43pm EDT
Very cute!
Deb J. Aug 29, 2007, 1:42am EDT
Well isn't that cute! That's how I feel during some of my shows too!
James B. Aug 29, 2007, 8:10am EDT
haha
Joe Corso Aug 31, 2007, 10:43pm EDT
Could you hold dinner till the game is over?
Jae F. Sep 4, 2007, 2:05am EDT
Joe you crack me up!!!
Crystal R. Aug 19, 2008, 12:18am EDT
Lovely poem.

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