Tomorrow

very nice. I enjoyed the eternity's the edge of tomorrow. That is so true. Tomorrow can bring so much.

Randy - Thank you, dear friend in cyberspace. I love your wonderful observations. You fragment the verse, as you like it best and I love writing it for you. Regards . . . . .

Amy - wish I could reach out and touch you!! Hope, is ALL we live by and YOUR posts give me so much hope!! Hang in there, you've gotta give us your best, YET, my friend.

very well written - thank you for sharing....j

.........~Though acuity of vision is dimming,
Age etched furrows, scar my face,........~

SO touching...........so me

Deep.

Where could tomorrow be hidden? Deep thought there Vinay.
While I shuffle groping walls of time seems a little too despondent for me. Is that what you really meant?
What do you mean by turning romanticism to reality? These are all thoughts that need expansion Vinay.
That doesn't mean that you don'r write well. You do and that's why I ask.

Jean - thank you, dear lady for stopping by to read and posting a comment on this article.

Jackie - right now I look amore or less the same as the pic in my icon - this has been written with the future in mind when "Age etched furrows" will be reality. Thank you, dear friend for your kind remarks.

Viemiki - thank you for reading my post first time. Please find time to read my other posts if you will. Thank you.

Fred - I've read your comments on the writing of others and I really appreciate you spending the time to point out what appears weak to you in these lines -

"Whilst I shuffle groping walls of time . . . ." is a reference to the future when I see myself as really old - the kids grown and gone and probably just me to myself.

"Turning romanticism to reality" is a reference to certain "far fetched ideas" that I do manage to turn to reality when I set my mind to it - does that make sense Fred? The entire poem is written having a future date in mind, the day I shall cease to be . . . .

Your input is valuable and I look forward to hearing more. Thank you, for helping me improve my writing. I'm obliged.

there always seems to be a touch of sadness intermingled with hope in your work. it fits my bi-polar mood perfectly ;) I really like this one

Deven - thank you - at heart I' am an optimist and sadness intermingled with hope seems a better option writing about than sadness intermingled with despair. LOL

Sonali - yes, to that TOMORROW - where bodies CANNOT but souls CAN! Thank you, for your ALWAYS complimentary posts.

Imagine another poem of yours that I like. Who woulda thought? ;-) Okay, now that i've been confirmed a dork...:-)

I really like this one. It might be because of the wonderful imagery and the mastery of words that you implore. Or, it could be because you use the word "Procrastination" and I am very much a fan of that. :-D Thanks for sharing your brilliance!

Samantha - thank you for your wonderful compliments. Its a pleasure to write when it is appreciated.