by Barbra L.

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September 30, 2006

Sacrifice: Single Word Challenge

May 21, 2008 09:06 PM EDT (Updated: May 25, 2008 02:01 PM EDT)

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"WAR IS SELDOM WITHOUT LOSS"

Soldiers

of daring boldness, intrepid courage;

Align

themselves for duties' call.

Caution

beckons, yet death awaits;

Relentless

battles take them all.

Inherent

are the pangs of death;

For

war is seldom without loss.

Inside

the throngs of destined blazes,

Carry

the waning soldier's cross.

Each

goes down in our history's journal

Sealed in the heart of "The Eternal".

*inherent; characteristic of something

*blazes; fire guns repeatedly

*"carry the waning soldier's cross" - dying soldier's burden

*The Eternal; God

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Comments: 41

Barbra L. May 21, 2008, 9:20pm EDT

God Bless Our Valiant Soldiers Who Have Given the Ultimate Sacrifice!!!

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amy s. May 22, 2008, 3:44pm EDT

wonderfully written and very well played thanks so much for a wonderful rendition of the our war torn history story

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Patti M. May 22, 2008, 5:30pm EDT

This is masterfully written. It really pulls at the heart.

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Virginia M. May 22, 2008, 5:42pm EDT

Barbra, this is-without doubt-a very well written poem, full of expression! I can't say I enjoy one line above another, because I simply love them all. I agree with the above comments, and as Patti said, "masterfully written."

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Shelbia C. May 22, 2008, 8:20pm EDT

You did an excellent job with this. Very well written.

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Anita R. May 23, 2008, 10:01am EDT

Inspiring, a wonderful tribute Barbra.

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Autumn Farrington May 23, 2008, 11:34am EDT

Barbra:

This is a touching ACROSTIC poem that reverently expresses the valiancy of our brave men and women. I love how the descriptive beginning of their character sets the tone for their call; their bravery and caution will long outlive the pangs of death they have suffered. And how true it is that "Each goes down in our history's journal--Sealed in the heart of "The Eternal". I LOVE THAT!!!

Powerful brevity honoring those worthy of being honored!

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Barbra L. May 23, 2008, 12:14pm EDT

Autumn, Anita, C.F., Shelbia, Virginia, Patti & Amy!!!

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Kathy W. May 24, 2008, 9:26pm EDT

Masterful closing on a stellar piece of writing:
Each
goes down in our history's journal
Sealed in the heart of "The Eternal".

Thank you.
Wilka

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Tracey W. May 25, 2008, 10:17am EDT

Beautiful, well written acrostic Barbra! It flows tirelessly to the end just as the soldiers you pay tribute to. Well done.

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Mike Ellwood May 25, 2008, 1:45pm EDT

Good poem. I especially liked the powerful, memorable rhyme you used to bring it to a close.

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Barbra L. May 25, 2008, 2:04pm EDT

Tracey,

I truly appreciate having placed! The military is very close to my heart, and I feel very honored that you have chosen this as one of the winning poems. Thank you.

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Barbra L. May 25, 2008, 2:05pm EDT

Mike & Kathy: Your comments always mean a lot. Both of you are wonderful inspirations. Thank you very much.

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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' May 25, 2008, 2:05pm EDT

My Dear fav poet,

Reading this great poem on this day, brings a lot of tender feelings in my soul.A tremendous tribute, stirring our inner feelings.Seems a mastermind job here, to the point and all true.

Love you Barbra and Thanks foer your kind words for me.

You're lovable..

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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' May 25, 2008, 2:06pm EDT

Congratulations Dear,

I must learn how to use few words, without getting distracted form the theme. A master-piece .

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Sheila Deeth May 25, 2008, 3:18pm EDT

Beautiful poem. Makes a genuine art form of the acrostic. Excellent win.

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Sheila Deeth May 25, 2008, 3:18pm EDT

Oh, and congratulations!

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Barbra L. May 25, 2008, 3:48pm EDT

Sheila & Bhawana: You two [POWs--pals] of mine bring tears to my eyes. I love you both so. Thank you more than I can express. Bhawana, my words to you are always from my heart. I thank you again, both of you, for all your support. Love & Hugs!

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Susan B. May 25, 2008, 5:43pm EDT

Well done acrostic! Congrats on your win :)

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Alison Pearce May 25, 2008, 6:48pm EDT

Magnificent!! Congrats Barbra!

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(The Other) Dale C. May 25, 2008, 7:39pm EDT

Very well done! Bravo!

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Barbra L. May 25, 2008, 10:02pm EDT

Susan, Alison and Dale: Thank you for your congratulatory words. God Bless!!!

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Autumn Farrington May 25, 2008, 11:41pm EDT

Congratulations, Barbra! Very beautifully penned!

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Anita R. May 26, 2008, 12:40am EDT

Barbra! Many congratulations - as I said before "inspiring."

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Barbra L. May 26, 2008, 10:57am EDT

Anita: You're a wonderful competitor and gracious lady. Thank you. God Bless!!!

Autumn: Thank you for all of your encouragement. God Bless!!!

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David S. May 26, 2008, 7:18pm EDT

Very nicely done! Congratulations!

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Barbra L. May 26, 2008, 8:30pm EDT

Thank you, David. It's always nice to see you. Hope we'll see your work this week in Poetry Please.

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Kelly M. May 26, 2008, 9:31pm EDT

Nicely done!

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*LORA* M. May 26, 2008, 9:31pm EDT

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Barbra L. May 27, 2008, 10:19am EDT

Lora, I appreciate your visit. Thank you.

Kelly: Thanks a lot!

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suey v. May 27, 2008, 9:39pm EDT

Great tribute!

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Sandra F. May 27, 2008, 9:47pm EDT

For something so tragic and depressing as war, you have written a very moving and inspirational poem that honors the soldiers. We must honor those who fight for us while fighting against the war itself.

I am glad that others recognized how well written this is.

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