o MY guest of heart!

What could this possibly have to do with the Harry Potter Gazette?

Though its transmission to almost every group known on Gather seems to be a prime example fitting in Shameless Self-Promotion.

Wonderful poem!

thanks for sharing your poem

thanks arlene and larry both.

Good job.

thanks janet

thanks

NICE POEM! THANKS FOR SHARING! ^_^

Some nice images, especially the first stanza.

some of your best stuff

(((Warm and comforting)))

Your poem is very lovely and heartfelt.
But you asked for "precious suggestion" so here goes…

I may be confused by your expressions so please do not take this as a negative criticism.

Let me sock up the wine of your moist eyes.

Did you mean "soak" or actually "sock"? Sock sounds too much like to hit or strike and I do not understand how that works with such a sweet sentiment.

Let me spread out my eyelids to welcome your steps to me.
I don't understand "spread out my eyelids" because the literal meaning is rather disturbing.

O my unanimous!

I do not get the impression from the use of this word that this person is special. Saying someone is unanimous sounds rather like a generic or general term for basically anyone.

I hope this is what you meant by "precious suggestion".

Yes, it is beautiful and heartfelt. I will send you a note about it.

beautiful write,I especially loved the rhythm of it.

very nice poem

You are growing beautifully in your poetry my friend. Keep at it. Thanks for sharing.

good job a 10

Writing at is's best! I really enjoyed reading this. Wonderfully penned my friend.

Very good stuff. I do believe that some of the loyalty you wanted to project may have been a little confusing with some of your words. I noticed this was a poem of love and comfort, that is great,as you left your reader to ponder the situation. A 10. Ellen b.

Thanks for sharing this with us. Heart to heart.

That was good Rajendra! ~Scott

This poem is so full of love, it is as rich with affection as those written by the Brownings. I loved it.

I like it. Good poem!

Beautiful poem

A wonderfully rapturous poem of invitation to the Friend in all the marvelous guises of our feeling palette, rajendra, written in an invocatory structure that crescendoes and climaxes beautifully for the reader. A real joy to read, this one.

Very impressive Rajengra,
Thank-you for sharing this poem from the heart with us...

writerlover

I enjoyed this one raj. some of the things you wrote were maybe difficult with the translation, but the feeling of it was very clear. thank you

Dear Raj, I know that when you write anything
that it comes from your heart. I may not quite
understand some of the things that are written
and that is understandable. Keep writing these
poems as they do get better as you go. Thanks
~The Heart Girl~

lovely!!!