Let's build this dream

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TK Rosevear Apr 1, 2007, 1:12pm EDT

You have been busy this morning, Anna.
This one, I felt deeply -10+
The picture is awesome also.

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Anna Cellmer Apr 1, 2007, 1:14pm EDT

Thank you for your visit and lovely comments Tk Rosevear :) You make me happy

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Anna Cellmer Apr 1, 2007, 3:00pm EDT

Thank you James how could I live without such sweet reader as you are for me?

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David Salyer Apr 1, 2007, 5:05pm EDT

Dreams allow us to go beyond what is possible. Very nice.

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Anna Cellmer Apr 2, 2007, 9:36am EDT

Oh yes David so much of this what we really have is hidden deeply inside minds, souls, we can do something with it or not too much just sometimes we can't free away from some thoughts or feelings emotions too, some of it can be shown but still all what really matter is hidden deeply just some of crumbs of it are spreding in a forms we can express this or in kind of inner light that is also possible to feel or see sometimes, but yes it's all sometimes seems to be one big illussion but always worth to believe and feel to enjoy this life to its fullest :) David your comments are really remarcable and I love them, thank you :)

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Kelly L. Apr 11, 2007, 2:30am EDT

Sometimes we beat ourselves up over the illusion of reality when all we really have to do is open our eyes... beautifully written!

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Mark Williams Apr 21, 2007, 6:18am EDT

Well felt, well written!
Your emotions shine.

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Anna Cellmer Apr 24, 2007, 8:08am EDT

Thank you Kelly and Mark :)

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Linda R. May 1, 2007, 2:29pm EDT

Very interesting...gives the feeling of finality...

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Fiona "not my real name of course" V. May 9, 2007, 6:45am EDT

what i like is that i am amazed you took a few lines and made them shine..and so few words..that are so exspressive and deep..I amazed by the art of poetry..wish i had this gift

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Spencer T. Jun 15, 2007, 9:24am EDT

Dreams are what pumps my desires to strive on. Good stuff.

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Tom C. Sep 1, 2007, 11:36am EDT

As John Lennon said, All We Need is Love. This poem expresses so clearly the power that love and believing can have in one's life. We all do make our own world, and why not aim for the sublime.

I really enjoyed this, Anna.

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