by ~*Jackie Ferrari*~
Member since:
August 8, 2006

A Brief Visit To You

February 25, 2007 10:37 AM EST (Updated: February 26, 2007 09:20 PM EST)
views: 136 | rating: 9.6/10 (18 votes) | comments: 19

You beckoned me to a place I never asked to visit

Your compassion~ crucial and accepted

Comfort is perpetually known and confirmed without question

Kindred spirits can not withold the gratification felt by both

How can I abandon you now?

The trip has just begun..................

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 

And so it has begun

We are grateful for this journey

For there is not an end in sight

Just a different means of travel

Kindred we are and we should stay

Patiently wait on me and pace this time we share

I seek not to withhold, but to save the loves I cherish

 
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Comments: 19

Ekta J. Feb 25, 2007, 10:51am EST
nice n beautiful.
Rob Appell Feb 25, 2007, 11:23am EST
Love in any form is a good love.
Vinay Benjamin Feb 25, 2007, 11:24am EST
Jackie - what a beautifully reassuring ending.

"How can I abandon you now?

The trip has just begun.................."

Well written.
Julie L. Feb 25, 2007, 11:26am EST
Very well done Jackie. 10
♥kyra D. Feb 25, 2007, 11:31am EST
Beautiful words Jackie.
Ron B. Feb 25, 2007, 12:05pm EST
I like it Jackie.
Free Spirit or the guy next door ~. Feb 25, 2007, 2:21pm EST
Very lovely and touching, right from the heart like an arrow peacing the soul, thanks for sharing from a lady with a golden heart.... ;~)
Fred Hose Feb 25, 2007, 2:44pm EST
Jackie I felt the words coming straight from your heart. Your poem was short but absolutely stunning.
Terry S. Feb 25, 2007, 3:47pm EST
Such beautiful words. They make it sound like such a wonderful journey. Well Done J.
Scott L. Feb 25, 2007, 11:35pm EST
Definitely short and sweet!
Jude Cowell Feb 26, 2007, 12:20am EST
A Perfect 10!
~*Jackie Ferrari*~ Mar 2, 2007, 6:31am EST
mocking your posts?.........I thought we had this conversation already, eh?
:O)
cyberspace...........
William K. Mar 4, 2007, 8:31pm EST
Nice, I felt it was about children growing up and leaving the nest. Or maybe friends that come into your life and then move on.
Jimmy _ Mar 5, 2007, 1:04am EST
That's beautiful!
Pamela G. Mar 6, 2007, 6:41am EST
I love this-lovely!
TD (aka: JaneDough) Mar 24, 2007, 6:23am EDT
I like it, Jackie.
allen b. Sep 12, 2007, 11:49pm EDT
beautiful
allen b. Jan 13, 2009, 11:11am EST
very beautiful

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