Quietly

Comments: 29

Linda R. Dec 28, 2006, 3:12pm EST

Well done. Wonderfully vivid word pictures.

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Lori White Dec 28, 2006, 3:13pm EST

Nice! Love the imagery! :)

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Debbie H. Dec 28, 2006, 3:16pm EST

This is too good Moggy!!! Sounds like anything can be a potential victim;)

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Μόףףý ● ķ ~ Dec 28, 2006, 3:19pm EST

Why thank you ladies! My first "poem" if that's what it is. I don't know what constitutes a poem but what the heck, I'm an artist not a poet.

Debbie, yes anything that is flesh and blood! ;)

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Randy- Being true to myself Dec 28, 2006, 3:23pm EST

very nice Moggy. It gave me the chills.

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Μόףףý ● ķ ~ Dec 28, 2006, 3:24pm EST

Thank you Randy! :)

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Μόףףý ● ķ ~ Dec 28, 2006, 3:32pm EST

LOL, not you Devil Woman! ;)

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June M Dec 28, 2006, 3:38pm EST

Wow! Now I am afraid to open the basement door. I can't believe this was your first try. You have more talent than you give yourself credit for.

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♯ ♪ Dec 28, 2006, 3:42pm EST

So, did you kick this woman's butt, or what?

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Μόףףý ● ķ ~ Dec 28, 2006, 3:45pm EST

Thanks June, are you serious?

Joanne, I'm a lover not a fighter. ;)

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☃ Aunt Shanny Dec 28, 2006, 3:57pm EST

I am guessing you read Fantasy Fiction..... :)

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Μόףףý ● ķ ~ Dec 28, 2006, 4:00pm EST

I used to read a lot of Stephen King and the like. Then I switced to true crime/serial killer type stuff. But I've always loved ghosts and monsters!

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Jody Says Dec 28, 2006, 4:15pm EST

I took this more as a mental thing than literal, and the color green, along with the imagery, made me feel as if the moster was envy. Coming from the depths of the soul to devour the person. Hey, that was just my take, I really liked it anyway.

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Joe H. Dec 28, 2006, 4:16pm EST

Very frightening, Moggy! Are you sure that's your first poem?

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♯ ♪ Dec 28, 2006, 4:36pm EST

Yes, I took the "green eyed monster" to mean jealousy! That's why I asked if the other woman were still alive! LOL!

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Lori Cee Dec 28, 2006, 4:46pm EST

i liked it! it brought to mind so many people ive come in contact with around here. hmmm...

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Μόףףý ● ķ ~ Dec 28, 2006, 4:53pm EST

Jody! You are very perceptive! I can't believe I was actually able to convey exactly what I wanted to and someone got it! Thanks!

I knew you got it Joanne! ;)

lori, ;)

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Johnny Gregory Dec 28, 2006, 5:02pm EST

Ya scared me Moggy! :)
Great piece.

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Lynn G. Dec 28, 2006, 5:03pm EST

Moggy, this is your FIRST poem? WOW! I see prizes in your future! This is excellent!

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Jody Says Dec 28, 2006, 7:17pm EST

You mean I finally got one right? Yay! what do I win, besides finally starting to understand poetry? I always seem to miss the authors point, but this one came right to me.

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Μόףףý ● ķ ~ Dec 28, 2006, 7:29pm EST

Thanks Johnny! :)

Yes Lynn, my very first, I WAS as virgin until now! :)

Jody, quite honestly I never "get" poetry and I don't even usually like it. For some reason, all of the sudden, I felt compelled to write this, go figure!

Thank you all for your comments! You all rock!

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